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『壹』 英语作文修改
第一句话image 应改为imagine ，后面是宾语从句，应用陈述句语序，即：what our life will be like...
『贰』 修改英语作文
Recently,it is reported that more than 80 percent of operations have been put off as a result of a lack of blood.What's worse,some hospitals are not able to supply enough for an operation,in this situation,lack of blood is expected to reach a most serious level in 10 years.
Now,there has been a heated discussion among netizens about the blood shortage,because of its wide spread.What's more,most of them are questioning about its free donation yet charged usage.Under this circumstance,the hospital is making money out of the free blood and sell it to people who are severe enough to have an operation....后面挺好
『叁』 英语作文修改
cause great改成greatly 很大复程度的改变比你产生了制巨大的影响更贴切一些。
save up改成save save up 是储存的意思，节省时间用save就可以。
technique can cause problem too. problem加上s，变成复数。
We human indeed us改成Our human。
and not lose要表达的是“而不是”的意思，所以改成“，rather than”
『肆』 英语作文修改
Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .
But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the procers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..
你自己对照一下，按原文意思更改。不当之处，请谅解！能力有限。
『伍』 免费修改英语作文
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请问你这句句子想表达什么意思专呢属?我不太理解.
『陆』 修改英语作文
语法似乎没什么问题...是内容不好吗
『柒』 修改英语作文，谢谢。
And if you feel tired,you can listen to music for relax,and take a walk is a good way,too.这句话有错，复应改为：
you can listen to music to realx,and taking a walk is a good way.
（你可以制听音乐来放松。表示所做的目的的用to. 这里的take是作主语，改为动名词taking.）
Good lucky!应改为：Good luck!
（good是形容词，形容词修饰的是名词。luck是名词，lucky是形容词。）
『捌』 一篇英语作文如何修改
修改·······好难的说，LZ先查找作文中有没有错误单词，LZ语法好的话，版再补漏语法错误。权这种东西比较繁琐，效果不好。
LZ把作文交给脑师说：“脑师好，帮我看一下作文好撒。”，一般脑师就会提出意见啦。
或者自己按照一篇作文题写出作文，然后对照答案，虽然不同，但也能起到思想修改的目的。
『玖』 修改英语作文（英语高手或老师请进）
写得还不错，略微修改了几处
Butterfly Effect
Butterfly, a lovely creature with colorful wings and slender cirrus, dances elegantly in flowers. What a beautiful picture! However, when a butterfly flaps its wings in Brazil, it may cause a hurricane in the USA. What a terrible a picture! This is called “butterfly effect”. It means that a tiny deviation will lead to a huge difference in the future. It may be hard to imagine, but it does happen.
Tony is a 12-year-old boy who is very naughty and sometimes behaves ridiculously. One day, Tony did a terrible thing with his so-called friends, which they thought would be funny. They put a lighted detonator into a postbox waiting for the explosion. But unexpectedly, a mother who had a baby in her arms was walking towards the postbox. At this moment, Tony had two different choices:
1. Tony may leave his friend who had put the detonator there and ran away. In such a case, the friend may become schizophrenia after the accident. Even worse, Tony may loose his friend forever and spend his rest life blaming on himself.
2. Tony rushed out timely and saved the mother and the baby, but his may loose his legs in the powerful explosion. In this scenario, Tony has to spend his rest life on a wheelchair but with no guilty feelings.
Two different behaviours may lead to two completely different lives. This is the power of “butterfly effect”. So be careful with your every act and every move. It may decide all your life.
『拾』 修改英语作文
As the saying goes,(英语里面没有冒号）"They say toothaches are nothing serious, but once it hurts, it kills.（俗语最好这样写）" I really agree to（agree to stth. 赞同…观点）it（可用it指代上述句子），because I used to have the same(这样表述好些）feeling. One day, I was having lunch.Suddenly（“突然”）,I hurt my tooth.Then（注意语义连贯）,it became(become表瞬间短暂性动作，is表长期持续性状态，改后更符合语境）loose, and I felt(“疼痛”是人的感观，而非事物性质）painful（pain是名词，painful才是形容词）.So I went to the hospital to see the dentist. At this time, I had a bad toothache(这才是“牙齿很痛”的正确翻译）. The dentist looked(是“牙医看上去恐怖”）terrible(用形容词）. “Open your mouth!”said the dentist deadpan.(英语中引用的话语提前，说话人跟在后面，且后面倒装）Then I opened my mouth. He put a pair of（“镊子”最好用a pair of ，指的是由两者组成的“一双；一对”） cold and hard tweezers into my mouth. I was very tension and tears came to my eyes（“眼泪流出来了”，tear最好这么用）. At last(强调结果）, the dentist pulled out（“拔出”） my tooth. Oh, my god! I was too painful to say a word! （too…to “太…而不能…”，把两句合为一句更连贯）At the end of treatment(At the end of … “在…结束的时候”）,I was very hungry,so my mom took me to eat something. Then I didn’t feel painful. It was really an interesting and terrible experience!
注：基本错误已指出，另外根据中文意思和英文表述还有要求进行了适当增删
建议：1、全文在叙述一件事，应保持时态一致，叙事部分全为过去时，否则就会出现“时态混乱”问题。
2、Be 后面接形容词而不是动词
3、“非常”最好用very 而不是 so
4、注意“中译英”要尽量避免受到中文思维习惯影响，这个需要lz平时多积累