英语一大作文第一句话亮点

① 求：高考英语作文亮点句型

1.It was not until I failed to pass the exam that I realized only
by making every effort to prepare it can one improve his grades.
直到考试失败抄,我才意识到只有全力做好准备,才能提高成绩一百字

② 英语作文用曾有这样一句话开头

According to one of the latest survies concted by certain of international organization , the money spent on AIDS annually is as much as …,which can … 2、 Our history has been filled with a varieties of examples of …,with the following one (此处也可以举具体的例子,如Michael Jordan)being the foremost . To begin with…, besides …,last but not least. 3、 Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard ,noticed and experienced ,the most impressive one is the following one . 4、 The past three decades has witnessed a remarkable achievement owing to China’ reform open-door policy being carried out ,bringing many problems at the same time ,with the following one being the foremost. 5、 The situation being so serious ,it is high time that we took some effective measures to … 6、 It is imperative that laws and regulations should be worked out to reverse this trend. 7、 With these laws and ecated people ,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes thing of the past. 8、 Only in a harmonious atmosphere can we hope the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the utmost. 9、 All the members in society should join their hands in creating a favorable environment for the old people 10、Part of the solution lies in technology itself. 11、虚拟语气：Were there no such policy ,we would never taste KFC .Were the situation to continue ,we would pay a high price. 12、图画作文中能用到的句子： （1）、There has being a heat discussion about this picture/drawing/cartoon ,in the newspaper. As is vividly betrayed in the drawing ,in the sunshine stands a beautiful American girl in Chinese traditional costume ,wearing earring and its like ,with sweet smile on her face.

③ 什么是英语作文的亮点

就是有精彩的句式，然后不要用一些太平常的词汇，稍微有一点难度的，比如同一个意思的词语，那么你最好换用稍微看起来有些深度的来用这样就会使作文精彩些

④ 怎样使英语作文有亮点

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。

⑤ 高考英语作文亮点句。比格特高那种。。

Stay hungry, stay foolish.
求知若饥，虚心若愚。

Innovation distinguishes between a leader and a follower.
创新决定你是领袖还是跟随者。

Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life.
你的时间有限，所以不要浪费时间去过别人的生活。

Design is not just what it looks like and feels like. Design is how it works.
设计不只是外表和感觉，设计是产品如何运作。

We're here to put a dent in the universe. Otherwise why else even be here?
活着就是为了改变世界，难道还有其他原因吗？

⑥ 英语作文引出一段经历开头怎么表达最出彩

This si one of the most important/interesting/weird memeries in my life.
THere is ong moment in my life that I won't forget in my life forever.

⑦ 怎么写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

字迹，短语，词汇，从句，句式。
短语词汇背点逼格高的，虚拟语气最好用用一句，定语从句基本每句话都可以用适当用两句就行了，句式去网上扒然后背，最后就是字迹流畅，整体美观。

⑧ 英语作文的开头和中间可以用什么亮点句子，可不可以举几个例子…

I have a thought that...我认为...... There is a piece of news that... 据说...

⑨ 开头有亮点的高考英语作文

我英语水平特差,临近高考想背几篇英语作文,开头要用上一些好的句形,结尾也要好!最主要的是单词不要过长,要附带汉语解释!题目随意!拜托!