英语作文错误
㈠ 急求英语作文错误！请高手帮忙
a lot of problm--a lot of problems
lead to changes in energy prices--lead to the changes in...
in energy prices.Including oil ,water,electricity and
coal's price to increase.--in energy prices, including the price rises in oil, water, electricity and coal.
Especially the ascension of petroleum price caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .--In particular, the the ascension of petroleum price has caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .
Not only let the management of many petroleum companies encounter severity loss,--This not only lets the management of many petroleum companies encounter severe loss,
but also let those factories which need the petroleum to be a raw material be suffered impaction --but also lets those factories which need the petroleum as a raw material suffer impaction .
Water, electricity and coal is people's proce of necessity in daily life --Water, electricity and coal are people's procts of necessity in daily life
particularly city residents who completely depend on running waterand electric appliances to live--particularly for city residents who completely depend on running water and electric supplies to live
say nothing of the residents in big city. --let alone the residents in big cities.
And then,lower consumer confidence ,increased spending.--And besides, consumers lose their confidence in it.
With those crisises--With those crises
We must to conservative use of non-renewable energy.--We must conserve the use of non-renewable energy
As soon as possible to expiore ,research,development and utilization of new energy--Explore, survey, develop and utilize the new energy as soon as possible.
㈡ 一些英语作文的错误，但不知道是怎么错的
1. 错误的原因是出现了俩个谓语动词。不关乎时态的问题。你几年级了？
这个句子可以改成：1）We took the bus to Beijing (Beijing前面也说不用冠词the的)
相同的用法有：I ride a bike to school（我骑单车上学）
2）We went to Beijing by bus
相同的用法有：I go to school by bike 我骑单车上学
2. 你记住句子只有一个谓语。再多就用不定式，分词等。
整个句子，你如果还没有就学从句，就要学会断开句子。或者换一种表达方式。你要表达的意思是此次活动的目的是想让人们知道应该爱护小树。
那么你可以说
We want people to learn to love and protect small trees by this green action.通过这次绿色活动，我们想让人们学会爱护小树。
We want people to know they should love and protect small trees by this green action.通过这次绿色活动，我们让人们知道，他们应该爱护小树。
希望可以给你一些启发
㈢ 英语作文不能出现错误！
如果是通知事情的话
第一句的规范表述是attention,please!
attention,please!there
is
going
to
be
an
magic
show
in
the
sun
teater
on
friday,and
the
famous
magicain
liu
qian
will
be
there.
if anyone
want
to
get
to
the
show,youcan
come
here
to
register.that's
all,thank
you
!
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㈣ 英语作文找错误
1. 第一行 Mike为人名要大写
2. 第二行第二句开头，than表示比较，估计你是想说then（接着），可是then放在这里也很怪，最好改成and：I am glad to hear from you, and i would like to tell you something about myself.
3. 我已经写出来了，把第二句的me改成myself.
4. 第三句句首大写，并把answer后的to去掉，可以把you改成your question，改为：To answer your question...
5. 从about a friend开始，句子就全错了。应该改为：I want to tell you about a friend of mine, who I think is my role model.
6. I call him "Xiao Gu".另起一句话，不要和上一句连在一起，因为它们没有并列关系。
7. 文章第六行：He don't like to study应改为He didn't like to study
8. 文章第七行：and always be terrible in his school test.
错1: be，改为behave
错2: in，改为on
错3: test，改为tests
9. 文章第八行：be改为became：but when he became a middle school student.
10. 文章第九行：every things改为everything
11. 文章第十行：I think前面逗号改句号
12. 文章第十一行：去掉also
13. 文章第十一行：it's a big change是单独一句话，前后都用句号。
14. 倒数第四行：had改为have；learn改为learned；the man改为a man
15. 倒数第二行：he is very kind前加and
16. 倒数第二，三行: And now, 去掉and；或者把and now改为in fact，更好。
17. 倒数第二行：that's all是单独一句话，后面可加“of him”
以上是语法错误。
㈤ 英语作文（有无错误）
噢……语法错误很少。
When
the
last
class
ends,he
will
go
home
to
having
his
lunch.
having
要改成 have，
to
have
his
lunch，动词不定式在句中作目的状语。
the
weather
often
is
very
hot.应该是the
weather is
often
very
hot.
副词often一般放在实义动词之前，be动词之后。
he
relaxes
half
an
hour.
最好是he
relaxes
himself
for
half
an
hour.或者he
has a
rest for
half
an
hour.
总之，你写得很不错。几个小小的建议。
1、英语作文的句式不要太单调。上文的前两行，都是以“He”开头，可以选用恰当的连接词（比如and）或变换句式。
2、大家都知道，英语的用词非常忌讳重复，always这个词在文中出现了三次，而且这个词有点绝对，不太好。如你把它换成usually，会更好一点。
其实写作文要重点突出、语句连贯、句式丰富、逻辑严密等等。你平常多练多写，就会成为达人了。祝你成功！
㈥ 请教：这篇英语作文有什么错误
首先，理解有误。你要讲清楚45%的同学认为不可能，接着讲原因。如：45% of my classmates think it is impossible for them to be friends because parents are too busy to take care of their children.英语是逻辑性很强的语言，所以父母太忙没时间关心孩子最好看出是因果关系，不能一味的用and来连接。
还有，However,55% of my classmates suppose that parents and children friendly at home.这句话that后面接的从句的动词也没有啊，这是语法错误。要求不是有“交谈”一词吗，既然出现了就不要省略，用“talk、chat或communicate”都可以啊
最后一点，题目要求你给出的观点是什么，你只要说parents can be friend 或 parents can't be friend就好了，因为说过头了，你的观点反而不明确了，像这种阐述观点的句子，越简单越直接越好。还有，very want你自己生造的吧，就说want ...very much 就好了
㈦ 这篇英语作文有什么错误
There are 22 boys and 18 girls in Class Three Grade One .Among them, 20 students want to play games or chat online with friends . 7 students would like to send or receive E-mails.There are 6 students who are willing to watch TV and listen to muisc.4 students read novels or news.There are 3 students searching for information.Only one student chooses to study.I think study and read news is good fo us,because we can learn some new knowledge and know what is happening in the world now.
你原来的句式太没变化，还是说要求必须用there be 句型？
㈧ 检查英语作文中的错误
1.When I was a little baby(baby是指婴儿，不是儿童的意思。baby改成boy.)
2.They played with me and we had a good time(最好改成They played with me and we used to have a good time.)
3.They're very friendly and we study English from each other.It can improve us to learn better.(they are very friendly to me and we learn english from each other which can improve our english level/which can make us learn better.后面可以用个非限定性定语从句，而且improve 或learn better 只选一个就好，要不然就有点语义重复了。）
4.cheer you on.(前面写的很好，cheer on 意为鼓励，这里也对。觉得cheer up 更好一点。）
5。So make friends are very useful.Don't forget make friends in anytime.（前一句要用动名词作主语，所以make 改成making.后一句forget to make friends)
希望对你有帮助。
㈨ 英语作文错误
You asked me what my favorite things are except study(应该用besides而不是except;what my favorite things are, besides study.)
now,(一个句子的首字母要大写应该为:Now,)
let me tell you.
One thing is surf(ing) on the internet.Because (In that case,)I can play computer games,talk with my friends and study for(in) this way,(.)
It is so interesting and relaxing(comfortable).The second,(Another thing )is collect(ing) stamps.And I like listen (to the) music.Pop music(music是不可数名词,不能加s) are(is) very cool,and lassical(classical) music make(s) me relax.
Yours.(,应该用逗号,而且,要另起一行)
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