英语六级作文高分范文

Ⅰ 英语四六级的高分作文范文有哪些 高分作文推荐

那可多了不如学习方法
拿一篇以前练习的作文来举例，按六级作文满分107分算，写的水平应该在73-83分之间。对于过分数线来说绰绰有余。你们看一下内容和语法，很普通。所以只要下一周功夫背点作文常用词汇常用句式，谁都能得个差不多的分。
关键在于，
1.单词拼写要正确。形容词动词名词，搞清楚。
2.语法正确。英语不像中文可以没有主语，英语句子必须有主语！
3.连接词使用，如本文recently conversely however what is more 等
4.句式使用。比如同一篇文章里分别有被动句，从句，虚拟语气，强调句。
英语多用被动句式，中文多用主动句式。
5.字迹工整，分段明确(3段或4段)
6.字数190-200字。我知道卷面要求150字就行，但是想多得点分的相信我，尽量写到190。(本文写了211词，有点冒)
7.用陈述句，不要像小学生一样用疑问句。
8.词汇能变化多样最好，比如think 可以换成believe hold reckon maintain argue claim 等等。
9.每段第一句话不要有错误！！

好啦，初等水平六级作文一篇如下:
最常考作文有两种 对立观点 和解决问题。
这篇是对立观点。问我们应不应该去扶跌倒老人。

Ⅱ 英语六级作文怎样写才能得高分

5个英语六级作文写作拿高分要点：
1、字迹清楚，段落明朗(clear)：字体不要太大，也不要太小，以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要一致，不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写，不能上窜下跳;总之，要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段，采用段首缩进式，即每段开头空4至8个字母的格，每段段首缩进的量要一致，要让阅卷人一目了然。
2、内容完整，紧扣提纲(complete)：一般来说，六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲，考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏，也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数，所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。
3、首保正确，再求闪光(correct)：这一条是最核心的，因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下，考生写出的内容几乎是一样的，唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确，哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的话再追求闪光的词句。例如，有考生在写2009年6月的作文时，写出了这样的开头句：There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 这句话是套用我以往范文给过的句子，基本结构是对的，但有两处明显的错误。一处为vital，是个形容词，而这里应该用名词。作者可能想用一个牛词来替换importance以显示用词多样，结果弄巧成拙。另外一处错误为name之前应该有冠词a，其实题目中都给了，结果这位同学忽略了，缺乏基本的语法意识。其实作文中常犯的语法错误除了冠词错误，还包括时态错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。下笔时一定要谨慎。篇幅关系这里不能赘述。
4、先总后分，连词用上(coherent)：这里说的是段落的结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局，另外，段落之间和句子之间的形式连接手段特别明显，即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候，几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句，然后再加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。当然有时候为了论证自然或扩展字数也可以加上一点铺垫的句子。如2009年6月真题作文开头一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. 然后再说Some hold the positive view.后面再加上两三句论证的话。论证句或扩展句之间最好有连接词，如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
5、语言简练，论据得当(concise)：不要啰嗦，不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型，为了凑字就全用上了，给人低层次的感觉。如最后一段用同学写道：As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. 其实As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一个就行了。另外，尽管内容不及语言重要，但也肯定会影响分数的。考生应尽量平时多练，以期在考场上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和贴切的例证。另外，要敢于表达自己的思想，不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前，只说一些小学生的话。如有同学写09年真题第一段时写道：Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误，但肯定也得不了高分。

六级写作是英语六级考试的第一部分，在写作中往往会遇到以下几方面的困难：时间不够，无话可说，语法错误多，语言简单，文章结构混乱等。而这些问题也是学生在作文考试中得分低的主要原因。如果大家在平时的练习中能够以解决这些问题为目标，相信在写作考试中就会游刃有余。
平时应该如何练习作文，下面给出4点学习建议，供参考。
1.多积累常用写作句型
平时练习时，学生应该多积累常用写作句型，比如作文首段，中间段落，连接词和结尾段。中间段落主要包括写观点，写原因，写后果，写建议，描写图表和图画等。这些都是考试中常见的作文题目中包含的内容，如果平时有所积累，那么上考场自然就不必咬着笔头，无从着手，慌乱紧张了。
2.写作时内容要完整
作文的内容必须包含考题中的所有内容，要紧扣主题和思考清晰。由于字数和时间的限制，所有的表达都要和主题相关，并且要避免冗长地表达，所有的表达句子要直接。近来的六级作文题目往往采用“全英文”的出题，所以大家务必要看懂题目，否则就会偏离主题，不知所云，分数堪忧。
3.写作时考虑到用词的变化
平时要多积累同义词或同义词词组，比如：如果在考场上想写“我认为”这一非常常见的表达，你会怎么写呢?如果你第一个想到的就是think，那么当然太过简单了，因为绝大部分的考生都会这么写，当然也不会让阅卷老师给你加分。但是如果你还能想到除了think之外的表达，比如contend, point out, be convinced等其他的表达，那么肯定能让阅卷老师印象深刻，因而提高作文得分。
4.学会写复杂句型，避免句型单一
很多学生在考场中的句型都是简单句，但是如果分析过高分作文，你不难发现这些作文中除了简单句之外，还有很多并列句和主从复合句。所以想要拿高分的同学必须学会写加分句型——并列句和主从复合句。
提高写作不是一时半会就能做到的，必须方法得当，持之以恒，其实英语学习都是如此，不经历一定的痛苦期是不会有顿悟的那一刻的。希望以上的4点学习建议能帮助学生在之后的六级考试中发挥出色，大家加油，Fighting!

Ⅲ 近两年英语六级作文范文

1989～1991年
<P>1989年1月六级作文题及范文</P>
<P>Directions: The Problem of Human Population <BR> 范文：<BR> It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth. However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times. Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million. The population explosion has caused many problems. Generally, they come down to four major ones.<BR> First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world. Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements. Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc. Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.<BR> Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population. <BR> <BR>1990年1月六级作文题及范文 </P>
<P>Directions: <BR>问题：城市交通拥护解决方案：（solution）<BR>1. 建造（lay down）更多道路<BR>优点：降低街道拥护程度加速车流（flow of traffic）<BR>缺点：占地过多<BR>2.开辟（open up）更多公共汽车线路<BR>优点：减少自行车与小汽车<BR>缺点：对部分人可能造成不方便<BR>结论：两者结合<BR>How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic </P>
<P>范文：<BR> The urban traffic is getting increasingly crowded nowadays in China. The roads are pakced with cars, bicylces and pedestrians and traffic jams, bus delays and traffic accidents are a common scene.<BR> Then how to solve this problem? Some suggest to lay down more roads to make the traffic less crowded and speed up the flow of traffic. Others believe that we should open up more public bus routes, so that more people will take the public buses instead of travelling by cars and bicycles.<BR> Though above two views sound reasonable, they have their own drawbacks. The fomer may take up much land which could be used for farms and houses. The latter may cause inconvenience for those who are used to travelling by car or bicycles. I think the best answer to the traffic problem is a combination of the two. More roads can be built to hold more traffic and meanwhile more public bus routes can be opened up to those who prefer to use the public transportation.<BR> <BR>1990年6月六级作文题及范文 </P>
<P>Directions: Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You are supposed to write in favour of one suggestion(ONE only)and against another(ONE only). You should give your reasons in both cases.<BR>四种可能解决住房问题的方案<BR>1．多造高层建筑<BR>2．向地下发展<BR>3．建造卫星城市<BR>4. 疏散城市人口<BR>How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities<BR> <BR>范文：<BR> The shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems facing many big citeis in China. Though the government has spent a large sum of money on housing, the investment has proced little financial return and a housing shortage still persists. Two generations sharing one room and newly-married couples finding it difficult to have a house of their own are still common cases. Housing shortage is a problem that requires and urgent solution.</P>
<P> People's attitudes towards the solution to the housing problem are different. Some suggest to build more high-rise apartments; others believe to develop underground housing areas. I am in favour of the former opinion. For one thing, it is cheaper to build above gound than below. For another, living underground for a long time will do harm to people's health. Above all, people are unwilling to live unerground with artificial lighting and they prefer to live above ground to enjoy the sunshine.<BR> Although there may be some other ways to solve the housing shortage problem, I believe to build more high-rise apartments is one of the promising solutions to the housing problem. <BR> </P>
<P>1991年1月六级作文题及范文 </P>
<P>Directions: <BR>1．人类面临的问题（如能源、疾病、污染、人口等）<BR>2．悲观的看法（人类将无法生存）<BR>3．人类的智慧出路<BR>Man Is to Survive<BR> </P>
<P>范文：<BR> Nowadays humanity is faced with a lot of troublesome problems: energy crisis, cancer, pollution, population explosion, etc. They are threatening the survival of humanity. Therefore, some people are pessimistic about the future of humanity.<BR> They are pessimistic because they think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon; incurable diseases are threatening more people's lives; pollution is worsening the environment; population explosion will make food shortage even more serious.<BR> Actually they needn't worry too much about these problems. Scientists will have developed new energy resources by the time oil and coal are used up. Besides, scientists are making a thorough study of genes and they will manage to cure cancer by adjusting the arrangement of genes. They are also making efforts to control pollution and population. Furthermore, all the governments in the world are concerned about these problems and they have taken measures to solve these problems.<BR> Therefore, we have every reason to be sure that human beings will conquer nature but they will never be conquered.</P>
<P>1991年6月六级作文题及范文 </P>
<P>Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the graph below.</P>
<P>Outline:<BR>1.Rise and fall of the rate of car accident as indicated by the graph;<BR>2.Possible reason (s) for the decline of car accidents in the city;<BR>3.Your predictions of what will happen this year.<BR>Food Year 1986 1987 1988 1989 1990<BR>Grain 49% 47% 46.5% 45% 45%<BR>Milk 10% 11% 11% 12% 13%<BR>Meet 17% 20% 22.5% 23% 21%<BR>Fruit and vegetables 24% 22% 20% 20% 21%<BR>Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%<BR>Your composition should be no less than 120 words and you should quote as few figures as possible.<BR> </P>
<P>范文：<BR> The graph shows the changing rate of car accidents in Walton city in 1990. The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. From June on the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. After August the rate began to decline, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year.</P>
<P> The highest rate in August was e to unfavorable weather conditions. Humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient, which easily leads to car accidents. The high rate in the first half of 1990 was also caused by the bad weather condition. In Walton City the excessive rain comes at early spring. The rain made road slippery, which often resulted in car accidents.<BR> This year the pattern is expected to change. The city government has raised fund to improve the road condition. Two new roads will be finished at the beginning of this year and are expected to open to traffic soon. Furthermore, the new road regulation provides that in summer every car must be air-conditioned. With all these precautions, I'm sure that the rate of car accidents will be much lower this year. </P>

1992～1994年
1992年1月六级作文题及范文

Directions:
1．电影观众越来越少
2．电视观众越来越多，因为...
3．然而，还是有人喜欢看电影，因为...
Film Is Giving Way to TV

范文：
Nowadays there are fewer and fewer cinema-goers and the cinema is slack. However, there are more and more TV viewers. There are many reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
First, film tickets are too expensive, while it doesn't cost much to watch TV at home. Besides, it is time-consuming and inconvenient to go to the cinema. Nevertheless, it is very convenient and comfortable to watch TV at home. You needn't go out but just need to turn on the television. Most important of all, if you don't like the film you'll have to sit through it; but if you don't like one programme on TV, you can shift to another.
However, some people still go to the cinema. They usually go to the cinema for the purpose of social contact. Young people go dating there. Other people go to the cinema as an activity. For example, schools often organize children to go to the cinema. Sometimes employees also go to the cinema with the film tickets presented by their institutions.

1992年6月六级作文题及范文

Directions:
1．新世纪科技发展的前景如何？
2．新的科学技术会给社会带来什么好处？
3．新的科学技术会给社会带来什么问题？
4. 你怎样对待新世纪的挑战？
Looking Forward to the Twenty-first Century

范文：
The new century is approaching. It can be expected that there will be a breakthrough in life sceience and space science in the 21st century.
First, scientists will conquer incurable diseases through the transformation of genes. With the same technology they can breed new species of animals and even human life in the laboratory. Most important of all, they can decelerate aging and prolong life.
Besides, permanent stations will be set up in the moon or other planets or stars so that scientists can make a thorough study of the moon and other planets or star. Most probably life will be found in other stars in universe or the planets or stars suitable for the human existence will be discovered.
However, the scientific development will also bring about some social problems. How should we regard from an ethical perspective the one who is bred through the gene technology in the laboratory. How can the police identify the criminal from a group of people with the same DNA?

It is quite natural that we will meet problems in the scientific and social development. Therefore, we should be prepared to meet new challenges.

1993年1月六级作文题及范文
Directions:
1.近年来中国城市中的摩托车
2.摩托车的优点和缺点
3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法

范文：
Nowadays, motorcycles are popular around us. They have be come an important means of transport in Chinese cities. Compared with the bike and the car, the motorcycle has its own advantages.
First, it is quite flexible. When there is a traffic jam, it can go through the cars that are held up in the street. Besides, it doesn't consume much petrol. Most important of all, it can carry another person at the back.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, it's very complicated to get qualified for riding a motorcycle. You'll have to go through a series of proceres to get a riding license. Furthermore, the maintenance is expensive. Worst of all, it costs a big sum of money to pay for the license plate, especially in Shanghai.
In conclusion, it has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. However, if the authorities concerned simplify the proceres and rece the cost of the license plate, the motorcycle will be accepted by more people.

1993年6月六级作文题及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on topic My View on Opportunity. You must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese):

有些人认为机会是极少的， 另一些人则认为人人都有某种机会。你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。

范文：
Different people have different views on opportunity. It is held that there are few opportunities. But it is also held that there re opportunities everywhere.
Those who hold the first opinion think that there are too many people and so there is always an intense competition for limited opportunities. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that if one is not prepared, he can hardly have any opportunities; however, if one is prepared, he can have a lot of opportunities.
As to me, I agtee with the latter opinion. Admittedly, there is really an intense competition for limited opportunities, but this is not to say that one can't create opportunities himself. In most cases opportunities are created by people themselves. For example, many people lost their jobs in recent years. Some people wait for opportunities in vain. However, others create opportunities themselves and get self-employed. Eventually they become employers themselves.
Therefore, to some extent, one can take his destiny into his own hands.

1994年1月六级作文题及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge. You should write no less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)

below:
1. 科学技术是社会发展所不可缺少的
2. 社会科学和自然科学相互渗透
3. 现代大学生需要广博的知识

We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge

范文：
Knowledge is power, especially scientific and technological knowledge. Science and technology are the motive power of the social development. Without them human society could never have developed from primitive society to modern society. Therefore, to conquer and transform nature, we must master scientific knowledge.

However, social knowledge is also essential. Without it we can not understand society and don't know the law of the social development. As a result we are unable to govern society. Therefore, besides scientific knowledge we need to master social science, philosophy, politics, history, aesthetics, etc, so that we can know society from all perspectives and form a correct world outlook.
To meet new challenges in he 21st century, we university students should lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible so that we will become qualified successors of the socialist cause.

1994年6月六级作文题及范文

Directions:
1．我理想的职业是什么？
2．为什么我选择这个职业？
3．我怎样为我理想的职业作准备？
The Career I Pursue

范文：
In China young people usually want to be engineers, doctors, businessmen, etc. and few want to be teachers. Unlike most young people I decide to be a teacher. There are many reasons for my personal preference but generally they come down to three major ones.
First, I was born in a teacher's family and so I was greatly influenced by my father. Second, I find that ecation is important because it is the basis of science and technology and if a country's ecation is backward, its science and technology will never be advanced. Third, teachers are needed in our country, especially in the countryside.
However, it is not easy to be a qualified teacher. A qualified teacher must have a good command of his specialty. Besides, he should be responsible and devoted to the ecational cause. Most important of all, he should be patriotic. To be a qualified teacher in the future I must lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible. 'Furthermore I must know the history of our country so as to cultivate patriotism.

1995～1998年
1995年1月六级作文题及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline

(given in Chinese) below:
1. 现在有些不良的商业广告
2. 这些广告的副作用和危害性
3. 我对这些广告的态度

范文：
Nowadays ther are a lot of false advertisements in society. They have caused many harms to society. Generally, their harms can be listed as follows.
First, they exaggerate the functions of the goods they advertise and mislead consumers. Second , some advertisements contain obscene contents and bring about spiritual pollution. Third, they seriously damage the credit of businesses because the shops which sell those goods will be distrusted and even considered the conspirators of those advertisers by consumers.
Personally, I am usually vigilant against any advertisements and so I have never been taken in. However, some people are crelous and are easily taken in. Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures must be taken to ban false advertisements and protect consumers' interests. First, all the advertisements must be strictly censored by the authorities concerned before they are published. Besides, severe unishment must be inflicted on those who publish illegal advertisements.
In conclusion, false advertisements must be eliminated in our society.

1995年6月六级作文题及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:Should Firecraekers Be Banned'?

You should write no less: than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below:
1．有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么?
2．有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么?
3．我的看法。
(Suggested key words: firecrackers(鞭炮) set off/let off(放鞭炮 )
Remember to write your composition neatly.

范文：
Different people have different views on firecrackers. Some people think that firecrackers should be banned because they endanger people's lives and social security. However, others hold that firecrackers houldn't be banned because they will drive evil spirits and bring luck.
As to me, I am in favor of the first idea. The reasons are as follows. First, addmittedly, letting off firecrackers will create an auspicious atmosphere, but it will not really bring luck to let off firecrackers. Besides, it is dangerous to let off firecrackers. It was reported that letting off firecrackers causes a lot of accidents, fire, injury, and even death every year.
However,it is our traditional custom to celebrate an important occasion by letting off firecrackers.How can we let off firecrackers whithoug causing accidents? The possible solution is that the substitute for the firecracker should be invented so that we can celebrate an important occasion whitout causing accidents.

1996年1月六级作文题及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Why I Take the College English Test Band 6. you should write at least 120 words and your composition should include the following two points (given in Chinese)：
1. 有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试（简称CET-6）。
2. 我参加CET-6考试的理由。

范文：
Some students think it unnecessary to take CET-6. They hold this views because CET-6 is not compulsory and they can get a degree so long as they pass CET-4. However, I think it necessary and beneficial to take CET-6. The reasons are obvious.
First, if I decide to take CET-6, natually, to pass CET-6 becomes a goal I set myself and with a goal to strive towards I will continue to study English hard. Of course my English will not be neglected in the third and fourth years. Besides, if I pass CET-6, I can get a certificate which, to some extent, shows my experience and qualification so that I can compete with other in job-hunting. Most important of all, a good knowledge of English will help my work and scientific research in the future.
All in all, taking CET-6 does good both to my studies and to my personal advancement.

1996年6月六级作文题及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Health Gains in Developing Countries. You must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese):
1. 以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命（life expectancy）和婴儿死亡率（infant mortality）的变化情况。
2. 说明引起变化的各种原因。

范文：
In the developing countries great changes took place in life expectancy and infant mortality in the period from 1960 to 1990. In 1960 life expectancy was very low, while infant mortality ws very high. However, in 1990 life expectancy increased, whereas infant mortality declined.
There are many reasons for the changes, but in general, they come down to three major ones. First, their living conditions were improved. In the old days people in the developing countries suffered hunger and were exposed to the elem