作文赏析英语

❶ 英语作文评析【七年级】

首先...时态要一致,全部过去时比较好,We dived three groups.Each group has three partners.就出现了两种时态了.第二,The weather in there is fine! 这句话怎么看着这么别扭呢...个别语法没注意,are first climb the top of the hill.应该是打少了人称了,不过不能又are又climb吧?你说想说We are the first one to climb the top of the hill吧?My friends want to have a competition about climb the hill.about是介词,climb要+ing还有,Then,my friends and I are having lunch at the top of the hill.这句是现在进行时,一篇文章出现三种时态就太混乱了.至于写得好不好,流水账肯定有一点了,不过对于初一而言也不需要在这方面太苛求,能通顺流畅,无语法错误就不错了,毕竟高中才注重文采方面.差不多就是这样了,自己检查下有没有语法错误之类的就差不多了~!

❷ 高二英语作文范文10篇及赏析

高二寒假英语作文： Favorite Sport
I like to do all kinds of sports, in the morning, I will do some jogging and in the evening, sometime I will go to the gym with my friends. My favorite sport is playing tennis, tennis brings my life so much happiness, I can watch the match while talking to my friends happily. To do the sport will improve my health and make me catch up with the time.
When I was small, one day, when I went home after school, I felt bored and opened the TV, then I saw the tennis match. Two beautiful girls were playing intensively, the game was so excellent, I couldn’t move my eye away from the match. From then on, I started to fall in love with tennis, I watched many matches and got to know more about the game.
Tennis sport is the combination of power and asthetics. The tennis players dress the beautiful clothes and their power make the ball fly quickly. The other tennis players will return the tennis ball with their rightly power. The game is so wonderful, if we watch the match alive.
There is no doubt that I am a big fan of the tennis sport. I find so much fun from it, it enriches my life.

❸ 赏析英语作文

y写的很有feel

❹ 英语作文赏析，急。

这篇文好方面应该是思路清晰,观点全面深刻.

全文用了whenever 引导的状语从句，if 虚拟语气从句（但是用的是一般时态 ）， disposable chopsticks 指的是一次性筷子，翻译得很到位，出彩句：I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help our world a better place to live in.其中用了多个从句和不定式
不足的:
有部分语法和逻辑错误:
I should try to use both sides of a piece of paper .paper在这里是不可数名词，表统称；a piece of paper 才是表达纸张的意思
I will not use( something )like paper cups and disposable chopsticks beacuse they're made of wood.
For me,I can try to save electricity in my daily life.前面的everyone是can 后面的I 最好保持一致
For example,if i am the last person to leave the classroom,I will always remember to turn off the lights不一定是晚上才开灯

PS.在中国式作文是很不错的一篇文了 ，但是以外教的眼光来看就显得有点“中式”英语.也许是被外教退文退得多了，挑了很多毛病而不是好的方面来说 还请见谅哈~

❺ 急需英语优秀作文5篇 （要带有点评和赏析）

I spend many hours playing outdoor sports. I enjoyed team sports like basketball and volleyball. Among lots of sports basketball is my favourite .I fall in love with it the first time I touch it.I really enjoy the feeling when you shoot the ball right in the basket,it brings me much confidence not only in basketball play but also in my real life.And when you play basketball you can learn a lot from it.The ball gets up and down just like how the life is.And everytime it gets down it bounces back,I know from this point that when we are defeated by the difficulties in life we should just get up and move on.Also we realise the importance of team work from basketball.Well it is my favourite sport,and I believe you will like it too

❻ 英语作文赏析一句话的结构

自己写吧！
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…
6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.It's likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.It's hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…

❼ 英语作文赏析怎么写呀

画出语法、短语

❽ 英语文章赏析

目睹战争
过去浮现在我眼前的就像是一场梦。我们再一次搅进为了民回族存亡的巨大的斗争中。当答他们应征进入这支伟大的自由之伍时我们在他们身边。我们看见他们和他们爱的人离别。这些人当中会有人是最后一次，和他们爱慕的少女，行走在这片安静的、葱郁的土地上。其他的则是正在接受祝福的年龄大一点的人。有些人在和母亲惜别，母亲们抓着他们的手再三地按在他们的心头，默然无语。有些人则和妻子话别，试着以平常的语气说些豪言壮语的话，来驱散她们心中对战争可怕的恐惧。我们看着他们离别。我们看着妻子们在阳光下呜咽。在道路的转弯处，妻子们挥挥手——高高抓着孩子们的手作为回应。他去了，永远的去了。

_________________________我翻译，故我赏析^_^

❾ 评析英语作文

首先的你的用词不够好，大量口语话的用词和拼写，在书面表达这是应该避免的。例如，首句中的many可以改为a plenty of 或者numerous；第二行中的mom最好写成mother；另外你用and作为开头太多了，或许这样可以调节句式，但是毕竟不是正式用法，你可以把and小写，直接作为并列从句。
第二，你的文章不是太简洁，虽然写够了70词，但是并没有传达出很多信息。例如，“she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe ···”一句，ask实际就有tell的意思，你可以把它改成，she ask me the reason and to beliece myself.
第三，你的文章逻辑性不强，也就是说连接词用的太少，句子间的过渡太突兀了。例如，首句你可以写成when I got "c "in a English test,I was very nervous.and I cried in my bedroom. At that moment my mom came in.你可以用连接词把文章整个串起来，这样的话时态就比较清晰，句式也复杂，逻辑性就强了。