英语润色作文

⑴ 英语小作文求润色修改~谢谢了

Of course, I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However, If I must choose one to recall, I will choose a meaningful event.
One day, our class visited Home for the Aged. For us,which is the first time to know the life of old people. We all touched by their hope of life and thier active attitude toword the life.

We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them, which made them really happy and content. As a part of this society, I think each of us is the master of society, we all should have the sense of responsibility, then the world will be more beutiful. If our strength can be gathered, it will become a strong force, which will be like a light shining in everyone's hearts.

Touching this socity, we know the feelings of love, kindness and the meaning of life.

⑵ 英语作文润色

…的同时，联合使用抗氧化、抗自由基、促进再生、细胞保护因子等产VV

⑶ 帮忙润色一篇我写的垃圾英语作文，在线等~

如果大脑里面没有垃圾英文，写出来的就一定不是垃圾英文了！如果把内汉语思维加进了英文里面，容一般出来的一定是垃圾英文。

因此，写作英文首先需要用大脑里面的最好最对的英文来思考，才有可能出来不垃圾的英文！

想了中文又写出英文，一般都是垃圾！

请改变思维！

⑷ 帮忙润色改改一篇英语演讲稿

我看下来之后觉得你是想表现你对于未来生活的迷茫，而并不是环城旅行。如果环城旅行是你所想表达的东西的话，建议还是重新写一篇吧。不过还是帮你改改。
I like travelling，because I can meet many people and visit many beautiful places .
One day, I was walking in a street. I found that people were all walking fast as if they had little time left. Just as I was wondering why, my friend called me. She asked me where I was, I told her I was in the city center and how noisy it was, how busy people looked. I asked her whether we would be person like them, lives seemed tired and no endless of boring work. She thought for a while,"maybe..."
After that I went to the library, borrowing some books about France, it has been my dream to go there to learn about design, how I wish I could paint in the ocean of lavender. I like that romantic life.
I returned home at last. The village which I live in is a little remote, but she is hugged by green mountains, I love her.
I looked deeply into the sky, I know wherever I go, I will come back ,here is always my home. Whenever I feel tired ,I will seek consolation here.

⑸ 能让你修改一篇英文的作文么，请将文章润色

我是高一的.
前一阵来作文比赛自才获了省一等奖.
开始我的作文写的并不好.但是渐渐好象有感觉了.以下是我对你的建议.
1就跟楼上说的一样，订一些好的杂志是十分必要的.那些短小精悍的文章很容易吸引人，也不会太乏味.但是前提是必须基于你对她有兴趣.没有兴趣就算订了也毫无作用.
建议订购:＜＜读者＞＞其实有几年高考的作文题可以从上面看到影子.而且这本杂志本身是很值得读的.＜＜意林＞＞这是我初2时无意间发现的一本杂志，我自己很喜欢.它里面都是先讲一个小故事，然后总结出人生道理，对素材积累很有帮助的.
2可以买基本高考满分作文.我自己没买，不过觉得应该会有作文.看看他们是怎样写的，为什么会打满分.特别是老师

⑹ 谁能帮我润色一下英语作文

Is it necessary to help someone who is in danger?This question often cause heated discussion.Recently,more people tend to be indifferent to people who are in need.
For example,when an old man fall down to the road , no one dare to show their kindness.how shameful this behavior is!Such news always make me feel sad.It's a pity that it might result in the absence of morality.
As I see,just as the proverb goes,the rose is in her hand,the flavor in mine.It should be put highest priority for us to help others.It is widely recognized that sometimes we would be exorted by those who behave wounded deliberately.What's more,what has resulted in the phenomenon is the loss of awareness of the moral values.
.As we all know,there is no denying of the fact that anybody wouldn't need others' help once in a while.Appealing to the public to help others is both significant and essential.Not only the citizens but also the government are supposed to take measures to minimize the loss of social morality so that there are more warm-hearted people and fewer cold-heart citizens.We might as well to be careful and ensure if they need help before we help others.Meanwhile,the society plays an important role in mutual assistance.
The more attention we pay to others,the more happiness we can generate .

只能这样了，这样显得文章更加完整一些，还是尽量不要网络一些句子，因为一些用法不是很对，用自己熟悉的或者是书上的

⑺ 我有篇英语作文需要修改，最好可以润色一下

总分630（语文150＋数学150＋英语150＋选科150＋综合30）
其中选科为政治、历史、地理（文科），内物理、化学、生容物（理科）中任意一门；综合分文科综合和理科综合，按150分满分评卷，再折算成30分
语文题型是：现代文阅读（2篇）＋文言文默写＋诗歌鉴赏＋文言文阅读（2篇）＋作文
数学题型是：填空题＋选择题＋简答题
英语题型是：听力（对话、短文、对话填空）＋语法词汇选择＋完型填空（2篇）＋阅读分析（5篇）＋翻译＋作文
我选的是政治，所以只知道选科里政治的题型是：单项选择＋多项选择＋时政填空＋简答＋分析说明＋论述