修改英語作文
『壹』 英語作文修改
第一句話image 應改為imagine ，後面是賓語從句，應用陳述句語序，即：what our life will be like...
『貳』 修改英語作文
Recently,it is reported that more than 80 percent of operations have been put off as a result of a lack of blood.What's worse,some hospitals are not able to supply enough for an operation,in this situation,lack of blood is expected to reach a most serious level in 10 years.
Now,there has been a heated discussion among netizens about the blood shortage,because of its wide spread.What's more,most of them are questioning about its free donation yet charged usage.Under this circumstance,the hospital is making money out of the free blood and sell it to people who are severe enough to have an operation....後面挺好
『叄』 英語作文修改
cause great改成greatly 很大復程度的改變比你產生了制巨大的影響更貼切一些。
save up改成save save up 是儲存的意思，節省時間用save就可以。
technique can cause problem too. problem加上s，變成復數。
We human indeed us改成Our human。
and not lose要表達的是「而不是」的意思，所以改成「，rather than」
『肆』 英語作文修改
Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .
But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the procers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..
你自己對照一下，按原文意思更改。不當之處，請諒解！能力有限。
『伍』 免費修改英語作文
www.pigai.org句酷批改網里的自測作文,可以幫你修改文章.
請問你這句句子想表達什麼意思專呢屬?我不太理解.
『陸』 修改英語作文
語法似乎沒什麼問題...是內容不好嗎
『柒』 修改英語作文，謝謝。
And if you feel tired,you can listen to music for relax,and take a walk is a good way,too.這句話有錯，復應改為：
you can listen to music to realx,and taking a walk is a good way.
（你可以制聽音樂來放鬆。表示所做的目的的用to. 這里的take是作主語，改為動名詞taking.）
Good lucky!應改為：Good luck!
（good是形容詞，形容詞修飾的是名詞。luck是名詞，lucky是形容詞。）
『捌』 一篇英語作文如何修改
修改·······好難的說，LZ先查找作文中有沒有錯誤單詞，LZ語法好的話，版再補漏語法錯誤。權這種東西比較繁瑣，效果不好。
LZ把作文交給腦師說：「腦師好，幫我看一下作文好撒。」，一般腦師就會提出意見啦。
或者自己按照一篇作文題寫出作文，然後對照答案，雖然不同，但也能起到思想修改的目的。
『玖』 修改英語作文（英語高手或老師請進）
寫得還不錯，略微修改了幾處
Butterfly Effect
Butterfly, a lovely creature with colorful wings and slender cirrus, dances elegantly in flowers. What a beautiful picture! However, when a butterfly flaps its wings in Brazil, it may cause a hurricane in the USA. What a terrible a picture! This is called 「butterfly effect」. It means that a tiny deviation will lead to a huge difference in the future. It may be hard to imagine, but it does happen.
Tony is a 12-year-old boy who is very naughty and sometimes behaves ridiculously. One day, Tony did a terrible thing with his so-called friends, which they thought would be funny. They put a lighted detonator into a postbox waiting for the explosion. But unexpectedly, a mother who had a baby in her arms was walking towards the postbox. At this moment, Tony had two different choices:
1. Tony may leave his friend who had put the detonator there and ran away. In such a case, the friend may become schizophrenia after the accident. Even worse, Tony may loose his friend forever and spend his rest life blaming on himself.
2. Tony rushed out timely and saved the mother and the baby, but his may loose his legs in the powerful explosion. In this scenario, Tony has to spend his rest life on a wheelchair but with no guilty feelings.
Two different behaviours may lead to two completely different lives. This is the power of 「butterfly effect」. So be careful with your every act and every move. It may decide all your life.
『拾』 修改英語作文
As the saying goes,(英語裡面沒有冒號）"They say toothaches are nothing serious, but once it hurts, it kills.（俗語最好這樣寫）" I really agree to（agree to stth. 贊同…觀點）it（可用it指代上述句子），because I used to have the same(這樣表述好些）feeling. One day, I was having lunch.Suddenly（「突然」）,I hurt my tooth.Then（注意語義連貫）,it became(become表瞬間短暫性動作，is表長期持續性狀態，改後更符合語境）loose, and I felt(「疼痛」是人的感觀，而非事物性質）painful（pain是名詞，painful才是形容詞）.So I went to the hospital to see the dentist. At this time, I had a bad toothache(這才是「牙齒很痛」的正確翻譯）. The dentist looked(是「牙醫看上去恐怖」）terrible(用形容詞）. 「Open your mouth!」said the dentist deadpan.(英語中引用的話語提前，說話人跟在後面，且後面倒裝）Then I opened my mouth. He put a pair of（「鑷子」最好用a pair of ，指的是由兩者組成的「一雙；一對」） cold and hard tweezers into my mouth. I was very tension and tears came to my eyes（「眼淚流出來了」，tear最好這么用）. At last(強調結果）, the dentist pulled out（「拔出」） my tooth. Oh, my god! I was too painful to say a word! （too…to 「太…而不能…」，把兩句合為一句更連貫）At the end of treatment(At the end of … 「在…結束的時候」）,I was very hungry,so my mom took me to eat something. Then I didn』t feel painful. It was really an interesting and terrible experience!
註：基本錯誤已指出，另外根據中文意思和英文表述還有要求進行了適當增刪
建議：1、全文在敘述一件事，應保持時態一致，敘事部分全為過去時，否則就會出現「時態混亂」問題。
2、Be 後面接形容詞而不是動詞
3、「非常」最好用very 而不是 so
4、注意「中譯英」要盡量避免受到中文思維習慣影響，這個需要lz平時多積累