批改英語作文

1. 求大神批改英語作文

題目有拼寫錯誤

In recent years, more and more people migrate to another country.
批改意見：more and more可以改為 an increasing number of

For instance,some stars,business men and the millionaire migrate to another country.
批改意見：stars, business men和millionaire 的並列性不太強，需要替換。migrate to another country與前文重復，可以替換為choose to immigrate into foreign countries.

What』s the reasons for this phenomenon.
批改意見：沒有問號……what's 應該為what are，注意主(reasons)謂(are)一致的問題。 句子可以考慮修改為What has led to the tend of migration?

First of all ,domestic environment become worse,such as haze weather and sandstorm weather.
批改意見：覺得這個高級詞彙使用上有點泛濫。國內的環境，霧霾天氣，沙塵暴天氣……這里的表達都非常的Chinglish。還不如改成，There is more extreme weather than before over the nation, such as sandstorms and severe smog. severe smog這個是我查BBCnews的表述，感覺比較native

And some big city』s traffic is heavy,population continues rise at the speed of 2 million people every year.
批改意見：還是表達很中國式英語的問題。建議改成The traffic in many cities is in poor condition because of numerous private cars. And the domestic population has started to climb sharply, increasing to 2 million annually.

Secondly,another country』s environment is better. Moveover,their policy of people is more humanized.
批改意見：怎麼都是中文直譯的感覺。要習慣native說話的語序。而且我覺得環境好這個理由有點牽強，畢竟世界上哪裡都有環境好的地方和污染中的地方，考慮替換另外一個理由。moreover拼寫錯誤。後面這一句Chinglish again，令我不禁懷疑這不會是翻譯軟體輔助的吧……而且什麼their policy？從英語角度考慮，這個they根本無從指向。而且這個理由寫得太sharp了，要是中國老師would probably want you to get real bad hurt.- -句子整句大修！考慮修改為Moreover, some foreign countries have better legal system so that indivial rights could be fully respected. 句子意思意會一下就可以了。

So people want to migrate to there.
批改意見：migrate to there低級錯誤。整個表達非常不可接受。For these reasons, quite a few people prefer to migrating to another country rather than staying in their home country。

Last but not the least,many people migrate to another country in order to follow the trend,They think migrate toanother country is also the symbol of reputation and wealth,so do they.
批改意見：Chinglish，不想重復了。Last but not least, many people choose abroad, following the trend of migration, most of whom think that migration is trappings of fame as well as wealth.

In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China. because China is a friendly country, she is our mother.
批改意見：我只是不喜歡這個句式而已……感覺就是用得太死板了。盡管是標准六級作文句式。我個人認為，語句流暢是很重要的。平時多點閱讀，培養語感。為什麼不喜歡這一句，是因為這個句式和前文的搭配感覺不和諧。……對，不……和……諧……讀起來特別別扭。標點什麼的就不吐槽了。because前後因果關系不強，比較牽強。In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China because China is our motherland, the most wonderful and historical country ever.

Although she has many disadvantages,we can help her to solve theproblems.And I believe that she will be better in the future...
批改意見：這句話要是批改老師看到了可能會罵一句熊孩子……好吧雖然我不是老師但我已經罵了。除了機器直譯這個蛋疼的東西，就是這兩句話所表達的意思……orz……不吐槽。Yet much else is discouraging，with lots of problems unsolved, our country is definitely worth our devotion to make it a better place.

總評：整篇文章的結構不是很清晰，需要分段，並且使用更多恰當的銜接過度的詞語。第三部分「我的看法」可以寫多一點，因為這篇文章是很清晰的三段式。分析原因的地方內容寫得不是很好，很空洞，沒有什麼實際的原因列出。內容也是很重要的！至於句子一些細節在上邊已經提到了，希望要好好注意！應該要重點表現的第三部分竟然這么短實在是很令人失望。要合理安排篇章的分布。

希望你寫作文可以有更大的進步！

看了很久打了很久，很認真的寫完了。

希望可以採納了哦親~~~

2. 求批改一篇英語作文 謝謝

1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子錯誤] 請檢查，確認主謂一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查句中謂語動詞。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查terriblethings，確認拼寫正確。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查andcriminal，確認拼寫正確。

[批改提示] person表示「人」。注意與people的區別。詳情點擊
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查twosides，確認拼寫正確。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的區別。

1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查distingushing，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] 查看clearly與clear的區別。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查do，確認主謂一致。

2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查asimilar，確認拼寫正確。

2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 請檢查a data in library，本族語中很少使用。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查myuniversity，確認拼寫正確。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.

2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查wasold，確認拼寫正確。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itscover，確認拼寫正確。

3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.

3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查peopleeasily，確認拼寫正確。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查onlyby，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近義表達有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itcompletely，確認拼寫正確。

4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[動詞錯誤] 請檢查spend enough timeand energy to understand，確認動詞用法正確。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查timeand，確認拼寫正確。
你可以搜索句酷批改網，很不錯的，上面內容均為那個網站上的。

3. 英語作文批改

第二段為了保持復時態制一致，第一句話也應該用過去時態，另外＂乘飛機去＂很少用take the air。通常可用 take a plane，或者更口語化一些，改為：I went to Saya by air this morning. 下一句... made me want to sleep ，從語法角度來說，沒錯。但不是英語習慣表達，建議改為：⋯made me feel sleepy 。下一句中can』t wait 應改為couldn』t wait,還是為了時態一致。下一句：The ocean was cool. 建議改為：The water in the ocean was rather cool.

4. 批改英語作文，，說明一下。

這次作文大有進步，語法錯誤大大減少了。

5. 求批改 英語作文

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Should college ecation focus.....

At first,one』s imagination dominates one』s creativity
改成：At first, imagination nurtures one』s creativity

Where you can stay depends on where you think you can
改成：your mind decides where you are

Imagination is a ladder which leads us to the peak of our life.
改成：imagination is THE ladder that leads us to the pinnacle of life
如果你使用which，前面要用逗號隔開

In China, many colleges just focus on the basic facts and knowledge, neglecting what the society really needs, which is a critical reason that Chinese always lack masters and world-famous scientists while in China there are numerous talented teenagers.
改成：In China, many colleges just (focus on the basic facts and knowledge and neglect what the society really needs), which is a critical reason why Chinese still lack masters and world-famous scientists while talented teenagers are not in shortage.
( )內的句子，讓後面的which修飾

Therefore, I made the conclusion that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward the hot issues for students and leave everything else for college students to investigate and create. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should take their charge in valuing students』 work and giving constructive advice to students.
改成：Therefore, I conclude that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward hot issues to students, and let students improvise their own conclusions. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should only asses students』 work and provide constructive advice to students.

6. 批改英語作文 英語怎麼說

批改英語作文
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check是檢查，不是批改
有不會的可以再問我

7. 英語作文求批改

文章用詞靈活多樣，學術詞彙使用也比較准確；句法知識很棒，若增加一些從句的使用，文章會更出色；銜接成分太少，文章結構欠佳；請注意分段。

1.1 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about a pervasive phenomenon. [教師點評]
[低頻警示] concerned about a pervasive phenomenon 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: quantity, amount, number, sum 均有「總數，總量」之意。
quantity: 書面用詞，指事物的總量和總數量，側重大批計量，含准確測量的意味。
amount: 普通用詞，與quantity近義，但強調整體，指把所有數量、重量及度量歸並在一起得出的總數。
number: 普通用詞，指人或物的數目，強調數的概念。
sum: 普通用詞，指簡單加算的結果。
[批改提示] people表示「人，民族」。查看與person的區別。
1.2 It is remarkable that a great many colleges appoint stars as their visiting professors. [教師點評]
[低頻警示] stars as their visiting professors 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 appoint...star 在教材中出現過 3 次
SeeAlso: name star88,nominate star24,charge star17
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: appoint, designate, assign, name, nominate 均有「任命，委派」之意。
appoint: 通常指不經過選擇的官方委任。
designate: 書面用語，側重當權者或機構的選拔或任命，有時含強行指定的意味。
assign: 常指給一群人或個人分配、分派、指派或委派任務。
name: 普通用詞，著重任命的結果，而不是過程。
nominate: 通常指為某一公職選擇候選人，並將其提交給有決定權的人作最後決定。
1.3 The concern was intensely raised whether this move is contributive to the long-term development of universities. [教師點評]
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 raise...concern 在教材中出現過 6163 次
SeeAlso: raise fear1075,arouse concern107,raise worry106,provoke concern66,kindle concern18,elicit concern14,evoke concern7,raise business6,raise care3
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含「事情」之意。
affair: 含義較廣，側重指已發生或必須去做的任何事情或事務。復數形式多指重大或較復雜的事務。
business: 通常指較重要或較難而又必須承擔的事情，也可指商事。
matter: 普通用詞，著重指一件考慮中的或需要處理的事。
concern: 往往強調與個人或團體利害有直接或重大關系的事。
thing: 用作「事情」解時，詞義較籠統、含糊，多用於指不很具體的事。
1.4 Some harbor that we should be aware that stars play a positive role in the development of society. [教師點評]
[名詞錯誤] 單復數錯誤，請檢查Some harbor後的名詞。
如： many students, more chances
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: aware, conscious, sensible 均含「意識到的」之意。
aware: 強調通過耳聞目睹或感覺而得到的信息，也指敏稅的觀察和推斷。側重感知，多與of一起用。
conscious: 指內心的感覺，強調深刻的心理活動。
sensible: 側重通過直覺或理性感覺意識到某物的存在。
1.5 In their eyes, it is celebrities that matter a lot in promoting the concept of perseverance and persistence. [教師點評]
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 promote...concept 在教材中出現過 104 次
SeeAlso: push concept75,advance concept21,raise concept15,advertise concept9,further concept3,elevate concept3
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 matter...lot 在教材中出現過 134 次
SeeAlso: count lot40,matter deal3
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion, impression 均有「思想，觀點，觀念」之意。
idea: 最普通常用詞，幾乎適用於任何方面的思維活動。
concept: 指從眾多實例中通過概括、歸納而形成的對事物本質、全貌及其內部聯系的概念或看法。
conception: 通常指個人或一些人所持有的具體概念或念頭，也可指概念的形成過程，含一定的想像和感情色彩意味。
thought: 指以推理、思考等智力活動為基礎的心理思維活動及其結果。
notion: 指的是一種模糊的，變化的莫測的想法，無可靠的基礎，未經深思熟慮的觀點。
impression: 指外部刺激在思想中所產生的印象。
[批改提示] promote近義表達有encourage/ further/ boost/ advance
1.6 The introction of them can stimulate students to pursue their dream persistently. [教師點評]
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 stimulate...student 在教材中出現過 3 次
SeeAlso: have student1529,get student266,make student93,excite student14,energize student9,cause student9,rush student7,provoke student5,shake student5,arouse student4
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 pursue...dream 在教材中出現過 598 次
SeeAlso: follow dream298,pursue ambition83,pursue aspiration13
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: introction, preface 均有「前言，導言」之意。
introction: 普通用詞，指任何作品開頭對讀者或聽眾說明或介紹該作品，起引導作用的結論部分，和全書內容是一致的。
preface: 指作者或編者為說明全書的目的、范圍、編輯方法等在序言之前寫的一段簡短的序文。
1.7 Moreover, were it for stars, the reputation of universities would be promoted remarkably. [教師點評]
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 promote...reputation 在教材中出現過 12 次
SeeAlso: boost reputation34,elevate reputation23,further reputation19,raise reputation11,promote report10,advance reputation10,push reputation4,upgrade reputation3
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: fame, honour, reputation, glory, renown 均有「名聲，名譽」之意。
fame: 普通用詞，含義廣，一般指好名聲，可大可小，可遠可近。
honour: 側重指因高尚的舉止，忠心或誠實而受到公眾欽佩和崇敬，得到好名聲和榮譽。
reputation: 通常指熟悉某人或某地的人對該人、該地的看法，可好可壞。
glory: 指因功績卓著而獲得的令人稱頌的光榮或榮譽地位。
renown: 指遠近聞名的聲譽。
[批改提示] 注意would和used to的區別。
[批改提示] promote近義表達有encourage/ further/ boost/ advance
1.8 Conversely, the opponents bitterly refute this view. [教師點評]
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 refute...view 在教材中出現過 13 次
SeeAlso: rebut view8
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: opponent, competitor, enemy, foe, rival 均有「對手，敵手」之意。
opponent: 最常用詞，通常指在爭論、辯論、競選或競賽以及其它各種矛盾沖突中站在對立面的「對手」或「敵手」。
competitor: 指為同一目標或目的競爭者，一般無感情色彩。
enemy: 多指充滿敵意的仇敵。
foe: 語氣較強，多用於書面文字和詩歌中。指不僅敵對，而且很危險，懷有很深的敵意。
rival: 指與某人目標一致而想趕上或超過他的人，匹敵者。
1.9 What they maintain is that the college, usually called ivory tower, primary function of which is doing academic research. [教師點評]
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有「學院，大學」之意。
college: 多指大學內的學院，分科學院或科目較少的高等學校。
university: 主要指綜合大學，一般由多個學院組成。當泛指大學時通常用college表示。
institute: 指設立有專門學科的學院，如外語學院、地質學院、建築學院等。
school: 指大學所屬的學院或系。
academy: 指(高等)專科院校或研究專門學術的學校。
[批改提示] usually的同義表達有for the most part。
[批改提示] primary的近義表達有radical或fundamental。
1.10 The introction of stars may destroy this atmosphere. [教師點評]
[低頻警示] the introction of stars 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 destroy...atmosphere 在教材中出現過 10 次
SeeAlso: ruin atmosphere15,destroy aura7,destroy ambience5,destroy ambiance5,destroy air4
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: atmosphere, air, gas 均與「空氣」有關。
atmosphere: 指圍繞有的星球，特別是圍繞地球的空氣，即大氣層。也可指環境氣氛。
air: 指空氣，也泛指一般氣體。
gas: 指氣態物，尤指供燃燒取暖或照明的氣體，其中一部分稱作瓦斯。
1.11 Meanwhile, undergraates are likely to be obsessed with their stars, thus not concentrating on their curriculum. [教師點評]
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: concentrate, focus 均有「集中，聚集」之意。
concentrate: 指把人或物集中在一起，也可指把精力或注意力集中於某一事物上。
focus: 側重指把光、熱、射線等集中於一點，也可指把思想或精力等集中於某人或某事情上。
[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的區別。
1.12 Therefore, it is not desirable to introce the celebrities. [教師點評]
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: accordingly, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus 均有「因此，所以」之意。
accordingly: 書面用詞，強調根據某種原因而得出的結果，其前可用冒號或分號，但不用逗號。
consequently: 正式用詞，側重符合邏輯的結果。
hence: 較正式用詞，指接下來的東西是理所當然的必需的東西，但強調其重要性。
so: 用於比較隨便的場合，口語中多用。
therefore: 通常指引出一個推斷出的必然結論。
thus: 多用於書面語中，可與therefore換用。
1.13 From my perspective, I'm convinced that a reasonable conclusion should be reached without a prejudice to any side. [教師點評]
[低頻警示] a prejudice to any side 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 reach...conclusion 在教材中出現過 2434 次
SeeAlso: reach decision1730,reach end631,reach closing32,reach close27,reach ending25,reach determination22,reach finish13,achieve conclusion4
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: ince, persuade, urge, convince, counsel, coax 均有「勸說，勸導，勸誘」之意。
ince: 指用講道理來使某人做某事。
persuade: 普通用詞，指通過勸說、感情交流等而使對方做勸說者所希望的事。
urge: 語氣強，指不斷地熱情地規勸誘導。
convince: 指憑行動、事實或言語使他人從思想感情上信服。
counsel: 較正式用詞，指對一些較重大事情所提出的勸告。有時也用於非正式場合，但仍強調嚴肅的一面。
coax: 指用好話善意或耐心勸誘、哄騙某人做某事。
1.14 Apparently, it has its strengths and weaknesses. [教師點評]
[批改提示] strength的近義表達有competitiveness。
1.15 Only by forming a rational perception can we defy all the odds to adapt to this new trend. [教師點評]
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: adapt, adjust, conform, accommodate, suit, fit 均有「使適合，適應」之意。
adapt: 指人或物在原有情況下作某些改變以適應新的環境或不同的條件，強調改變的目的和重要性。
adjust: 與adapt含義很接近，但adjust所改變的幅度要小一些，側重過程，主要用於調整角度、高度、光點等。
conform: 多指與某模式或規則相符，也引申指改變習慣等以適應新的環境。
accommodate: 書面用詞，指以外部條件標准改變自己或某事以求得適應，著重改變或調節的有利。
suit: 指適合要求，從而使人滿意愉快。
fit: 含義廣，指人或物適合或適應某一目的或用途。
[批改提示] 查看trend和direction的區別。
[批改提示] 注意odd與odds區別。
[批改提示] defy近義表達有face/ confront/ stand up to

8. 怎樣批改英語作文

從教二十年，每天改作業，最怕的就是該學生的英語作文。寫錯單詞的，用錯句型的，存在語法錯誤的，毛病皆是。有的同學的作文如要一一幫他改正錯誤，等於老師重新幫他寫了一篇作文。這樣勢必造成批閱時間過長，影響其他環節的工作。如果粗略批閱則會阻滯學生英語寫作能力的提高。針對這一問題，我摸索出一套自認為行得通的方法。 根據不同情況採用不同的批改方法。如果是在課堂上進行的寫作（每個單元拓展部分都有寫的能力的活動）。採取大家批。具體操作是抽兩名同學在黑板上寫，其他同學在練習本上寫。寫完之後，和同學們一起當老師，找黑板上兩位同學寫的文章的錯誤。讓有類似錯誤的同學改正。指出文章的不足之處，有哪些地方需要改進。同時也要指出優點有哪些地方可供同學們學習.效仿。通過大家當老師一起改作文的方法既調動了學生的學習氣氛又加深了犯錯同學的印象，讓他們不再犯同樣的錯誤。 如果是課後作文，則採用收上來祥批和略批方式交叉進行。要確保每個同學在一期的英語寫作中有幾次祥批的機會。祥批時改出學生寫作中詞彙.句法.章法的錯誤。甚至包括單詞拼寫，大小寫，標點符號和其他語法錯誤。指出學生存在的問題指明其努力方向。略批則只畫圈圈點點，打分分等級。啟發學生自己去找錯誤。培養其自發學習的能力。 如果是自習課上的課文，則採取互相批改的方法。先由老師講解批改要點，指出批改方法和原則，注意要指出批改的具體注意點。如：大小寫，單詞拼寫，標點，時態，語態，人稱，句子結構，句子順序等等。讓學生心中有數，從而批改更詳細。 當然，經過不同方法的寫作批改後，有的同學可能寫作水平任是濤聲依舊。這時則需要找空閑時間面對面的批改了。就是當著學生面對面地批改。當面指出其存在的錯誤，讓學生自己改正錯誤以加深印像。改完之後，讓學生再體會一下。以便更好的整理思緒。 以上這些就是我在批改英語作文中找到的一些方法。希望同行多提意見，幫助我更好的搞好教學工作。

9. 批改我的英語作文

Nowadays, more and more children prefer eating meat better than green vegetables。第二個太多餘了。
declivous應為delicious
a fifteen year old 應為 a fifiteen-year-old；
And應該小寫前面改成逗號,或者改成What's more, vagetables...。
lots前面加上since/because連成一句比較好。
如果要用are made ill，後面最好用by,這句話最好說lots of people become ill because of ...
後面的on有點嫌疑。。保險起見把on them 刪掉吧。
即：What's more, vegetables can be dangerous since lots of people are become ill because of the pesticides the farmers use. So I like meat.z注意每個句子不要太獨立，用點so這類的連接詞，會比較連貫。

it is not quiet right。。quiet應該是quite。這句話是病句，純中國式英語。。。太繞了，直接說However，that's not right.
Always eating meat 也是中國式英語。always 表示的可能性特別大，接近百分之百。改為：eating meat too much can also be dangerous！
heart attacks表示心臟病發作，最好改成heart disease。我印象中plenty修飾不可數名詞。can only find 改為can only be found.
A lack of vegetables is a lack of proteins.我覺得有點問題，但說不出問題在哪裡，你可以查一下lack 的用法。
On the one hand...on the other hand 要配套使用，同時只適用於相反的兩個方面（這點和多人不知道，會亂用）
and so do me不好，要用也是so do I

還有，你這篇作文的結構有點亂，缺乏條理，既然後面還要講吃太多菜不好，就前面就不要用Sally說了，直接總-分-總。
我一直搞不懂為什麼就冒出個Sally來了。。。
從你的作文看得出閱讀量有點不足，英語語感有待加強。平時多閱讀一些文章，21世紀報不錯。。。

呃。。。如果你是初中生，這篇作文很不錯。如果你是高中生，建議你不要只寫一些簡單句，高中的作文適當增加復雜句型（不多，一兩句就夠了，但是前提是要寫對。。）可以給作文增色不少，畢竟高中的作文要求會比較高。。。

我說話有點直，別介意。。。如果生氣，5分我不要就是了。。。就這樣啦~再接再厲~

10. 幫忙批改一篇英語作文

1.建議通篇用一般現在時 2.it extremely proves... 3.and makes 4.comfortable 5.it is nearly difficult to live without it 6.reading 7.know 8.and enjoy 9.instead of going10.when they finish their11.you can't imagine that you don't have TV in the home12.the other is...13.easily 14.it is more convenient to send an e-mail than the ... 15.to get news and interesting...16.you can use the commucation software such as QQ,MSN by which you can keep...17.so that you don't have to...18want to relax there are19.all of these 20if we don't haveTV...21.life will be in a ..