英語作文錯誤
㈠ 急求英語作文錯誤！請高手幫忙
a lot of problm--a lot of problems
lead to changes in energy prices--lead to the changes in...
in energy prices.Including oil ,water,electricity and
coal's price to increase.--in energy prices, including the price rises in oil, water, electricity and coal.
Especially the ascension of petroleum price caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .--In particular, the the ascension of petroleum price has caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .
Not only let the management of many petroleum companies encounter severity loss,--This not only lets the management of many petroleum companies encounter severe loss,
but also let those factories which need the petroleum to be a raw material be suffered impaction --but also lets those factories which need the petroleum as a raw material suffer impaction .
Water, electricity and coal is people's proce of necessity in daily life --Water, electricity and coal are people's procts of necessity in daily life
particularly city residents who completely depend on running waterand electric appliances to live--particularly for city residents who completely depend on running water and electric supplies to live
say nothing of the residents in big city. --let alone the residents in big cities.
And then,lower consumer confidence ,increased spending.--And besides, consumers lose their confidence in it.
With those crisises--With those crises
We must to conservative use of non-renewable energy.--We must conserve the use of non-renewable energy
As soon as possible to expiore ,research,development and utilization of new energy--Explore, survey, develop and utilize the new energy as soon as possible.
㈡ 一些英語作文的錯誤，但不知道是怎麼錯的
1. 錯誤的原因是出現了倆個謂語動詞。不關乎時態的問題。你幾年級了？
這個句子可以改成：1）We took the bus to Beijing (Beijing前面也說不用冠詞the的)
相同的用法有：I ride a bike to school（我騎單車上學）
2）We went to Beijing by bus
相同的用法有：I go to school by bike 我騎單車上學
2. 你記住句子只有一個謂語。再多就用不定式，分詞等。
整個句子，你如果還沒有就學從句，就要學會斷開句子。或者換一種表達方式。你要表達的意思是此次活動的目的是想讓人們知道應該愛護小樹。
那麼你可以說
We want people to learn to love and protect small trees by this green action.通過這次綠色活動，我們想讓人們學會愛護小樹。
We want people to know they should love and protect small trees by this green action.通過這次綠色活動，我們讓人們知道，他們應該愛護小樹。
希望可以給你一些啟發
㈢ 英語作文不能出現錯誤！
如果是通知事情的話
第一句的規范表述是attention,please!
attention,please!there
is
going
to
be
an
magic
show
in
the
sun
teater
on
friday,and
the
famous
magicain
liu
qian
will
be
there.
if anyone
want
to
get
to
the
show,youcan
come
here
to
register.that's
all,thank
you
!
有疑問請追問
㈣ 英語作文找錯誤
1. 第一行 Mike為人名要大寫
2. 第二行第二句開頭，than表示比較，估計你是想說then（接著），可是then放在這里也很怪，最好改成and：I am glad to hear from you, and i would like to tell you something about myself.
3. 我已經寫出來了，把第二句的me改成myself.
4. 第三句句首大寫，並把answer後的to去掉，可以把you改成your question，改為：To answer your question...
5. 從about a friend開始，句子就全錯了。應該改為：I want to tell you about a friend of mine, who I think is my role model.
6. I call him "Xiao Gu".另起一句話，不要和上一句連在一起，因為它們沒有並列關系。
7. 文章第六行：He don't like to study應改為He didn't like to study
8. 文章第七行：and always be terrible in his school test.
錯1: be，改為behave
錯2: in，改為on
錯3: test，改為tests
9. 文章第八行：be改為became：but when he became a middle school student.
10. 文章第九行：every things改為everything
11. 文章第十行：I think前面逗號改句號
12. 文章第十一行：去掉also
13. 文章第十一行：it's a big change是單獨一句話，前後都用句號。
14. 倒數第四行：had改為have；learn改為learned；the man改為a man
15. 倒數第二行：he is very kind前加and
16. 倒數第二，三行: And now, 去掉and；或者把and now改為in fact，更好。
17. 倒數第二行：that's all是單獨一句話，後面可加「of him」
以上是語法錯誤。
㈤ 英語作文（有無錯誤）
噢……語法錯誤很少。
When
the
last
class
ends,he
will
go
home
to
having
his
lunch.
having
要改成 have，
to
have
his
lunch，動詞不定式在句中作目的狀語。
the
weather
often
is
very
hot.應該是the
weather is
often
very
hot.
副詞often一般放在實義動詞之前，be動詞之後。
he
relaxes
half
an
hour.
最好是he
relaxes
himself
for
half
an
hour.或者he
has a
rest for
half
an
hour.
總之，你寫得很不錯。幾個小小的建議。
1、英語作文的句式不要太單調。上文的前兩行，都是以「He」開頭，可以選用恰當的連接詞（比如and）或變換句式。
2、大家都知道，英語的用詞非常忌諱重復，always這個詞在文中出現了三次，而且這個詞有點絕對，不太好。如你把它換成usually，會更好一點。
其實寫作文要重點突出、語句連貫、句式豐富、邏輯嚴密等等。你平常多練多寫，就會成為達人了。祝你成功！
㈥ 請教：這篇英語作文有什麼錯誤
首先，理解有誤。你要講清楚45%的同學認為不可能，接著講原因。如：45% of my classmates think it is impossible for them to be friends because parents are too busy to take care of their children.英語是邏輯性很強的語言，所以父母太忙沒時間關心孩子最好看出是因果關系，不能一味的用and來連接。
還有，However,55% of my classmates suppose that parents and children friendly at home.這句話that後面接的從句的動詞也沒有啊，這是語法錯誤。要求不是有「交談」一詞嗎，既然出現了就不要省略，用「talk、chat或communicate」都可以啊
最後一點，題目要求你給出的觀點是什麼，你只要說parents can be friend 或 parents can't be friend就好了，因為說過頭了，你的觀點反而不明確了，像這種闡述觀點的句子，越簡單越直接越好。還有，very want你自己生造的吧，就說want ...very much 就好了
㈦ 這篇英語作文有什麼錯誤
There are 22 boys and 18 girls in Class Three Grade One .Among them, 20 students want to play games or chat online with friends . 7 students would like to send or receive E-mails.There are 6 students who are willing to watch TV and listen to muisc.4 students read novels or news.There are 3 students searching for information.Only one student chooses to study.I think study and read news is good fo us,because we can learn some new knowledge and know what is happening in the world now.
你原來的句式太沒變化，還是說要求必須用there be 句型？
㈧ 檢查英語作文中的錯誤
1.When I was a little baby(baby是指嬰兒，不是兒童的意思。baby改成boy.)
2.They played with me and we had a good time(最好改成They played with me and we used to have a good time.)
3.They're very friendly and we study English from each other.It can improve us to learn better.(they are very friendly to me and we learn english from each other which can improve our english level/which can make us learn better.後面可以用個非限定性定語從句，而且improve 或learn better 只選一個就好，要不然就有點語義重復了。）
4.cheer you on.(前面寫的很好，cheer on 意為鼓勵，這里也對。覺得cheer up 更好一點。）
5。So make friends are very useful.Don't forget make friends in anytime.（前一句要用動名詞作主語，所以make 改成making.後一句forget to make friends)
希望對你有幫助。
㈨ 英語作文錯誤
You asked me what my favorite things are except study(應該用besides而不是except;what my favorite things are, besides study.)
now,(一個句子的首字母要大寫應該為:Now,)
let me tell you.
One thing is surf(ing) on the internet.Because (In that case,)I can play computer games,talk with my friends and study for(in) this way,(.)
It is so interesting and relaxing(comfortable).The second,(Another thing )is collect(ing) stamps.And I like listen (to the) music.Pop music(music是不可數名詞,不能加s) are(is) very cool,and lassical(classical) music make(s) me relax.
Yours.(,應該用逗號,而且,要另起一行)
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