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英語六級作文高分範文

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Ⅰ 英語四六級的高分作文範文有哪些 高分作文推薦

那可多了不如學習方法
拿一篇以前練習的作文來舉例,按六級作文滿分107分算,寫的水平應該在73-83分之間。對於過分數線來說綽綽有餘。你們看一下內容和語法,很普通。所以只要下一周功夫背點作文常用詞彙常用句式,誰都能得個差不多的分。
關鍵在於,
1.單詞拼寫要正確。形容詞動詞名詞,搞清楚。
2.語法正確。英語不像中文可以沒有主語,英語句子必須有主語!
3.連接詞使用,如本文recently conversely however what is more 等
4.句式使用。比如同一篇文章里分別有被動句,從句,虛擬語氣,強調句。
英語多用被動句式,中文多用主動句式。
5.字跡工整,分段明確(3段或4段)
6.字數190-200字。我知道卷面要求150字就行,但是想多得點分的相信我,盡量寫到190。(本文寫了211詞,有點冒)
7.用陳述句,不要像小學生一樣用疑問句。
8.詞彙能變化多樣最好,比如think 可以換成believe hold reckon maintain argue claim 等等。
9.每段第一句話不要有錯誤!!

好啦,初等水平六級作文一篇如下:
最常考作文有兩種 對立觀點 和解決問題。
這篇是對立觀點。問我們應不應該去扶跌倒老人。

Ⅱ 英語六級作文怎樣寫才能得高分

5個英語六級作文寫作拿高分要點:
1、字跡清楚,段落明朗(clear):字體不要太大,也不要太小,以行間距的三分之一到二分之一為合適;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽小;字母的傾斜方向要一致,不要東倒西歪;要抵著給出的虛線寫,不能上竄下跳;總之,要給閱卷人清楚、工整的感覺。段落一般為三段,採用段首縮進式,即每段開頭空4至8個字母的格,每段段首縮進的量要一致,要讓閱卷人一目瞭然。
2、內容完整,緊扣提綱(complete):一般來說,六級寫作都會給出三點漢語提綱,考生應嚴格按照三點寫成三段。不要有遺漏,也不要隨意改變提綱要點的順序。因為閱卷人要在30秒左右的時間打出分數,所以不希望看到與提綱嚴重背離的作文。
3、首保正確,再求閃光(correct):這一條是最核心的,因為在寫作時間和篇幅都比較短的情況下,考生寫出的內容幾乎是一樣的,唯一的判斷標准幾乎就是語言的質量。要首先保證語法和拼寫正確,哪怕用小詞、短句也可以。有能力的話再追求閃光的詞句。例如,有考生在寫2009年6月的作文時,寫出了這樣的開頭句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 這句話是套用我以往範文給過的句子,基本結構是對的,但有兩處明顯的錯誤。一處為vital,是個形容詞,而這里應該用名詞。作者可能想用一個牛詞來替換importance以顯示用詞多樣,結果弄巧成拙。另外一處錯誤為name之前應該有冠詞a,其實題目中都給了,結果這位同學忽略了,缺乏基本的語法意識。其實作文中常犯的語法錯誤除了冠詞錯誤,還包括時態錯誤、名詞和動詞單復數錯誤、代詞不一致錯誤、詞性錯誤以及句子主謂不完整錯誤。下筆時一定要謹慎。篇幅關系這里不能贅述。
4、先總後分,連詞用上(coherent):這里說的是段落的結構和連貫性的問題。英語文章特別喜歡先總後分或開門見山的格局,另外,段落之間和句子之間的形式連接手段特別明顯,即關聯詞用的很多。在寫作的時候,幾乎就是把給出的三點提綱作為每段的開頭句,然後再加上兩三個擴展句即理由或例證句就可以了。當然有時候為了論證自然或擴展字數也可以加上一點鋪墊的句子。如2009年6月真題作文開頭一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. 然後再說Some hold the positive view.後面再加上兩三句論證的話。論證句或擴展句之間最好有連接詞,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
5、語言簡練,論據得當(concise):不要啰嗦,不要過於重復和堆砌。有些考生背誦了一些經典的句型,為了湊字就全用上了,給人低層次的感覺。如最後一段用同學寫道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. 其實As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一個就行了。另外,盡管內容不及語言重要,但也肯定會影響分數的。考生應盡量平時多練,以期在考場上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和貼切的例證。另外,要敢於表達自己的思想,不要一味地為了保證語言正確而裹步不前,只說一些小學生的話。如有同學寫09年真題第一段時寫道:Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 這樣的作文倒是沒有語言錯誤,但肯定也得不了高分。

六級寫作是英語六級考試的第一部分,在寫作中往往會遇到以下幾方面的困難:時間不夠,無話可說,語法錯誤多,語言簡單,文章結構混亂等。而這些問題也是學生在作文考試中得分低的主要原因。如果大家在平時的練習中能夠以解決這些問題為目標,相信在寫作考試中就會游刃有餘。
平時應該如何練習作文,下面給出4點學習建議,供參考。
1.多積累常用寫作句型
平時練習時,學生應該多積累常用寫作句型,比如作文首段,中間段落,連接詞和結尾段。中間段落主要包括寫觀點,寫原因,寫後果,寫建議,描寫圖表和圖畫等。這些都是考試中常見的作文題目中包含的內容,如果平時有所積累,那麼上考場自然就不必咬著筆頭,無從著手,慌亂緊張了。
2.寫作時內容要完整
作文的內容必須包含考題中的所有內容,要緊扣主題和思考清晰。由於字數和時間的限制,所有的表達都要和主題相關,並且要避免冗長地表達,所有的表達句子要直接。近來的六級作文題目往往採用「全英文」的出題,所以大家務必要看懂題目,否則就會偏離主題,不知所雲,分數堪憂。
3.寫作時考慮到用詞的變化
平時要多積累同義詞或同義詞片語,比如:如果在考場上想寫「我認為」這一非常常見的表達,你會怎麼寫呢?如果你第一個想到的就是think,那麼當然太過簡單了,因為絕大部分的考生都會這么寫,當然也不會讓閱卷老師給你加分。但是如果你還能想到除了think之外的表達,比如contend, point out, be convinced等其他的表達,那麼肯定能讓閱卷老師印象深刻,因而提高作文得分。
4.學會寫復雜句型,避免句型單一
很多學生在考場中的句型都是簡單句,但是如果分析過高分作文,你不難發現這些作文中除了簡單句之外,還有很多並列句和主從復合句。所以想要拿高分的同學必須學會寫加分句型——並列句和主從復合句。
提高寫作不是一時半會就能做到的,必須方法得當,持之以恆,其實英語學習都是如此,不經歷一定的痛苦期是不會有頓悟的那一刻的。希望以上的4點學習建議能幫助學生在之後的六級考試中發揮出色,大家加油,Fighting!

Ⅲ 近兩年英語六級作文範文

1989~1991年
<P>1989年1月六級作文題及範文</P>
<P>Directions: The Problem of Human Population <BR> 範文:<BR> It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth. However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times. Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million. The population explosion has caused many problems. Generally, they come down to four major ones.<BR> First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world. Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements. Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc. Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.<BR> Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population. <BR> <BR>1990年1月六級作文題及範文 </P>
<P>Directions: <BR>問題:城市交通擁護解決方案:(solution)<BR>1. 建造(lay down)更多道路<BR>優點:降低街道擁護程度加速車流(flow of traffic)<BR>缺點:佔地過多<BR>2.開辟(open up)更多公共汽車線路<BR>優點:減少自行車與小汽車<BR>缺點:對部分人可能造成不方便<BR>結論:兩者結合<BR>How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic </P>
<P>範文:<BR> The urban traffic is getting increasingly crowded nowadays in China. The roads are pakced with cars, bicylces and pedestrians and traffic jams, bus delays and traffic accidents are a common scene.<BR> Then how to solve this problem? Some suggest to lay down more roads to make the traffic less crowded and speed up the flow of traffic. Others believe that we should open up more public bus routes, so that more people will take the public buses instead of travelling by cars and bicycles.<BR> Though above two views sound reasonable, they have their own drawbacks. The fomer may take up much land which could be used for farms and houses. The latter may cause inconvenience for those who are used to travelling by car or bicycles. I think the best answer to the traffic problem is a combination of the two. More roads can be built to hold more traffic and meanwhile more public bus routes can be opened up to those who prefer to use the public transportation.<BR> <BR>1990年6月六級作文題及範文 </P>
<P>Directions: Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You are supposed to write in favour of one suggestion(ONE only)and against another(ONE only). You should give your reasons in both cases.<BR>四種可能解決住房問題的方案<BR>1.多造高層建築<BR>2.向地下發展<BR>3.建造衛星城市<BR>4. 疏散城市人口<BR>How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities<BR> <BR>範文:<BR> The shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems facing many big citeis in China. Though the government has spent a large sum of money on housing, the investment has proced little financial return and a housing shortage still persists. Two generations sharing one room and newly-married couples finding it difficult to have a house of their own are still common cases. Housing shortage is a problem that requires and urgent solution.</P>
<P> People's attitudes towards the solution to the housing problem are different. Some suggest to build more high-rise apartments; others believe to develop underground housing areas. I am in favour of the former opinion. For one thing, it is cheaper to build above gound than below. For another, living underground for a long time will do harm to people's health. Above all, people are unwilling to live unerground with artificial lighting and they prefer to live above ground to enjoy the sunshine.<BR> Although there may be some other ways to solve the housing shortage problem, I believe to build more high-rise apartments is one of the promising solutions to the housing problem. <BR> </P>
<P>1991年1月六級作文題及範文 </P>
<P>Directions: <BR>1.人類面臨的問題(如能源、疾病、污染、人口等)<BR>2.悲觀的看法(人類將無法生存)<BR>3.人類的智慧出路<BR>Man Is to Survive<BR> </P>
<P>範文:<BR> Nowadays humanity is faced with a lot of troublesome problems: energy crisis, cancer, pollution, population explosion, etc. They are threatening the survival of humanity. Therefore, some people are pessimistic about the future of humanity.<BR> They are pessimistic because they think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon; incurable diseases are threatening more people's lives; pollution is worsening the environment; population explosion will make food shortage even more serious.<BR> Actually they needn't worry too much about these problems. Scientists will have developed new energy resources by the time oil and coal are used up. Besides, scientists are making a thorough study of genes and they will manage to cure cancer by adjusting the arrangement of genes. They are also making efforts to control pollution and population. Furthermore, all the governments in the world are concerned about these problems and they have taken measures to solve these problems.<BR> Therefore, we have every reason to be sure that human beings will conquer nature but they will never be conquered.</P>
<P>1991年6月六級作文題及範文 </P>
<P>Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the graph below.</P>
<P>Outline:<BR>1.Rise and fall of the rate of car accident as indicated by the graph;<BR>2.Possible reason (s) for the decline of car accidents in the city;<BR>3.Your predictions of what will happen this year.<BR>Food Year 1986 1987 1988 1989 1990<BR>Grain 49% 47% 46.5% 45% 45%<BR>Milk 10% 11% 11% 12% 13%<BR>Meet 17% 20% 22.5% 23% 21%<BR>Fruit and vegetables 24% 22% 20% 20% 21%<BR>Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%<BR>Your composition should be no less than 120 words and you should quote as few figures as possible.<BR> </P>
<P>範文:<BR> The graph shows the changing rate of car accidents in Walton city in 1990. The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. From June on the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. After August the rate began to decline, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year.</P>
<P> The highest rate in August was e to unfavorable weather conditions. Humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient, which easily leads to car accidents. The high rate in the first half of 1990 was also caused by the bad weather condition. In Walton City the excessive rain comes at early spring. The rain made road slippery, which often resulted in car accidents.<BR> This year the pattern is expected to change. The city government has raised fund to improve the road condition. Two new roads will be finished at the beginning of this year and are expected to open to traffic soon. Furthermore, the new road regulation provides that in summer every car must be air-conditioned. With all these precautions, I'm sure that the rate of car accidents will be much lower this year. </P>

1992~1994年
1992年1月六級作文題及範文

Directions:
1.電影觀眾越來越少
2.電視觀眾越來越多,因為...
3.然而,還是有人喜歡看電影,因為...
Film Is Giving Way to TV

範文:
Nowadays there are fewer and fewer cinema-goers and the cinema is slack. However, there are more and more TV viewers. There are many reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
First, film tickets are too expensive, while it doesn't cost much to watch TV at home. Besides, it is time-consuming and inconvenient to go to the cinema. Nevertheless, it is very convenient and comfortable to watch TV at home. You needn't go out but just need to turn on the television. Most important of all, if you don't like the film you'll have to sit through it; but if you don't like one programme on TV, you can shift to another.
However, some people still go to the cinema. They usually go to the cinema for the purpose of social contact. Young people go dating there. Other people go to the cinema as an activity. For example, schools often organize children to go to the cinema. Sometimes employees also go to the cinema with the film tickets presented by their institutions.

1992年6月六級作文題及範文

Directions:
1.新世紀科技發展的前景如何?
2.新的科學技術會給社會帶來什麼好處?
3.新的科學技術會給社會帶來什麼問題?
4. 你怎樣對待新世紀的挑戰?
Looking Forward to the Twenty-first Century

範文:
The new century is approaching. It can be expected that there will be a breakthrough in life sceience and space science in the 21st century.
First, scientists will conquer incurable diseases through the transformation of genes. With the same technology they can breed new species of animals and even human life in the laboratory. Most important of all, they can decelerate aging and prolong life.
Besides, permanent stations will be set up in the moon or other planets or stars so that scientists can make a thorough study of the moon and other planets or star. Most probably life will be found in other stars in universe or the planets or stars suitable for the human existence will be discovered.
However, the scientific development will also bring about some social problems. How should we regard from an ethical perspective the one who is bred through the gene technology in the laboratory. How can the police identify the criminal from a group of people with the same DNA?

It is quite natural that we will meet problems in the scientific and social development. Therefore, we should be prepared to meet new challenges.

1993年1月六級作文題及範文
Directions:
1.近年來中國城市中的摩托車
2.摩托車的優點和缺點
3.你對我國城市中摩托車發展前景的看法

範文:
Nowadays, motorcycles are popular around us. They have be come an important means of transport in Chinese cities. Compared with the bike and the car, the motorcycle has its own advantages.
First, it is quite flexible. When there is a traffic jam, it can go through the cars that are held up in the street. Besides, it doesn't consume much petrol. Most important of all, it can carry another person at the back.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, it's very complicated to get qualified for riding a motorcycle. You'll have to go through a series of proceres to get a riding license. Furthermore, the maintenance is expensive. Worst of all, it costs a big sum of money to pay for the license plate, especially in Shanghai.
In conclusion, it has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. However, if the authorities concerned simplify the proceres and rece the cost of the license plate, the motorcycle will be accepted by more people.

1993年6月六級作文題及範文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on topic My View on Opportunity. You must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese):

有些人認為機會是極少的, 另一些人則認為人人都有某種機會。你的看法如何?寫出你的觀點,說明你的理由並舉例。在你的文章結尾處不要忘記寫出你的結論。

範文:
Different people have different views on opportunity. It is held that there are few opportunities. But it is also held that there re opportunities everywhere.
Those who hold the first opinion think that there are too many people and so there is always an intense competition for limited opportunities. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that if one is not prepared, he can hardly have any opportunities; however, if one is prepared, he can have a lot of opportunities.
As to me, I agtee with the latter opinion. Admittedly, there is really an intense competition for limited opportunities, but this is not to say that one can't create opportunities himself. In most cases opportunities are created by people themselves. For example, many people lost their jobs in recent years. Some people wait for opportunities in vain. However, others create opportunities themselves and get self-employed. Eventually they become employers themselves.
Therefore, to some extent, one can take his destiny into his own hands.

1994年1月六級作文題及範文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge. You should write no less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)

below:
1. 科學技術是社會發展所不可缺少的
2. 社會科學和自然科學相互滲透
3. 現代大學生需要廣博的知識

We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge

範文:
Knowledge is power, especially scientific and technological knowledge. Science and technology are the motive power of the social development. Without them human society could never have developed from primitive society to modern society. Therefore, to conquer and transform nature, we must master scientific knowledge.

However, social knowledge is also essential. Without it we can not understand society and don't know the law of the social development. As a result we are unable to govern society. Therefore, besides scientific knowledge we need to master social science, philosophy, politics, history, aesthetics, etc, so that we can know society from all perspectives and form a correct world outlook.
To meet new challenges in he 21st century, we university students should lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible so that we will become qualified successors of the socialist cause.

1994年6月六級作文題及範文

Directions:
1.我理想的職業是什麼?
2.為什麼我選擇這個職業?
3.我怎樣為我理想的職業作準備?
The Career I Pursue

範文:
In China young people usually want to be engineers, doctors, businessmen, etc. and few want to be teachers. Unlike most young people I decide to be a teacher. There are many reasons for my personal preference but generally they come down to three major ones.
First, I was born in a teacher's family and so I was greatly influenced by my father. Second, I find that ecation is important because it is the basis of science and technology and if a country's ecation is backward, its science and technology will never be advanced. Third, teachers are needed in our country, especially in the countryside.
However, it is not easy to be a qualified teacher. A qualified teacher must have a good command of his specialty. Besides, he should be responsible and devoted to the ecational cause. Most important of all, he should be patriotic. To be a qualified teacher in the future I must lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible. 'Furthermore I must know the history of our country so as to cultivate patriotism.

1995~1998年
1995年1月六級作文題及範文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline

(given in Chinese) below:
1. 現在有些不良的商業廣告
2. 這些廣告的副作用和危害性
3. 我對這些廣告的態度

範文:
Nowadays ther are a lot of false advertisements in society. They have caused many harms to society. Generally, their harms can be listed as follows.
First, they exaggerate the functions of the goods they advertise and mislead consumers. Second , some advertisements contain obscene contents and bring about spiritual pollution. Third, they seriously damage the credit of businesses because the shops which sell those goods will be distrusted and even considered the conspirators of those advertisers by consumers.
Personally, I am usually vigilant against any advertisements and so I have never been taken in. However, some people are crelous and are easily taken in. Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures must be taken to ban false advertisements and protect consumers' interests. First, all the advertisements must be strictly censored by the authorities concerned before they are published. Besides, severe unishment must be inflicted on those who publish illegal advertisements.
In conclusion, false advertisements must be eliminated in our society.

1995年6月六級作文題及範文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:Should Firecraekers Be Banned'?

You should write no less: than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below:
1.有人認為放鞭炮是好事,為什麼?
2.有人認為放鞭炮是壞事,為什麼?
3.我的看法。
(Suggested key words: firecrackers(鞭炮) set off/let off(放鞭炮 )
Remember to write your composition neatly.

範文:
Different people have different views on firecrackers. Some people think that firecrackers should be banned because they endanger people's lives and social security. However, others hold that firecrackers houldn't be banned because they will drive evil spirits and bring luck.
As to me, I am in favor of the first idea. The reasons are as follows. First, addmittedly, letting off firecrackers will create an auspicious atmosphere, but it will not really bring luck to let off firecrackers. Besides, it is dangerous to let off firecrackers. It was reported that letting off firecrackers causes a lot of accidents, fire, injury, and even death every year.
However,it is our traditional custom to celebrate an important occasion by letting off firecrackers.How can we let off firecrackers whithoug causing accidents? The possible solution is that the substitute for the firecracker should be invented so that we can celebrate an important occasion whitout causing accidents.

1996年1月六級作文題及範文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Why I Take the College English Test Band 6. you should write at least 120 words and your composition should include the following two points (given in Chinese):
1. 有人認為沒有必要參加大學英語六級考試(簡稱CET-6)。
2. 我參加CET-6考試的理由。

範文:
Some students think it unnecessary to take CET-6. They hold this views because CET-6 is not compulsory and they can get a degree so long as they pass CET-4. However, I think it necessary and beneficial to take CET-6. The reasons are obvious.
First, if I decide to take CET-6, natually, to pass CET-6 becomes a goal I set myself and with a goal to strive towards I will continue to study English hard. Of course my English will not be neglected in the third and fourth years. Besides, if I pass CET-6, I can get a certificate which, to some extent, shows my experience and qualification so that I can compete with other in job-hunting. Most important of all, a good knowledge of English will help my work and scientific research in the future.
All in all, taking CET-6 does good both to my studies and to my personal advancement.

1996年6月六級作文題及範文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Health Gains in Developing Countries. You must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese):
1. 以下圖為依據描述發展中國家的期望壽命(life expectancy)和嬰兒死亡率(infant mortality)的變化情況。
2. 說明引起變化的各種原因。

範文:
In the developing countries great changes took place in life expectancy and infant mortality in the period from 1960 to 1990. In 1960 life expectancy was very low, while infant mortality ws very high. However, in 1990 life expectancy increased, whereas infant mortality declined.
There are many reasons for the changes, but in general, they come down to three major ones. First, their living conditions were improved. In the old days people in the developing countries suffered hunger and were exposed to the elem

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