作文賞析英語
❶ 英語作文評析【七年級】
首先...時態要一致,全部過去時比較好,We dived three groups.Each group has three partners.就出現了兩種時態了.第二,The weather in there is fine! 這句話怎麼看著這么別扭呢...個別語法沒注意,are first climb the top of the hill.應該是打少了人稱了,不過不能又are又climb吧?你說想說We are the first one to climb the top of the hill吧?My friends want to have a competition about climb the hill.about是介詞,climb要+ing還有,Then,my friends and I are having lunch at the top of the hill.這句是現在進行時,一篇文章出現三種時態就太混亂了.至於寫得好不好,流水賬肯定有一點了,不過對於初一而言也不需要在這方面太苛求,能通順流暢,無語法錯誤就不錯了,畢竟高中才注重文采方面.差不多就是這樣了,自己檢查下有沒有語法錯誤之類的就差不多了~!
❷ 高二英語作文範文10篇及賞析
高二寒假英語作文： Favorite Sport
I like to do all kinds of sports, in the morning, I will do some jogging and in the evening, sometime I will go to the gym with my friends. My favorite sport is playing tennis, tennis brings my life so much happiness, I can watch the match while talking to my friends happily. To do the sport will improve my health and make me catch up with the time.
When I was small, one day, when I went home after school, I felt bored and opened the TV, then I saw the tennis match. Two beautiful girls were playing intensively, the game was so excellent, I couldn』t move my eye away from the match. From then on, I started to fall in love with tennis, I watched many matches and got to know more about the game.
Tennis sport is the combination of power and asthetics. The tennis players dress the beautiful clothes and their power make the ball fly quickly. The other tennis players will return the tennis ball with their rightly power. The game is so wonderful, if we watch the match alive.
There is no doubt that I am a big fan of the tennis sport. I find so much fun from it, it enriches my life.
❸ 賞析英語作文
y寫的很有feel
❹ 英語作文賞析，急。
這篇文好方面應該是思路清晰,觀點全面深刻.
全文用了whenever 引導的狀語從句，if 虛擬語氣從句（但是用的是一般時態 ）， disposable chopsticks 指的是一次性筷子，翻譯得很到位，出彩句：I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help our world a better place to live in.其中用了多個從句和不定式
不足的:
有部分語法和邏輯錯誤:
I should try to use both sides of a piece of paper .paper在這里是不可數名詞，表統稱；a piece of paper 才是表達紙張的意思
I will not use( something )like paper cups and disposable chopsticks beacuse they're made of wood.
For me,I can try to save electricity in my daily life.前面的everyone是can 後面的I 最好保持一致
For example,if i am the last person to leave the classroom,I will always remember to turn off the lights不一定是晚上才開燈
PS.在中國式作文是很不錯的一篇文了 ，但是以外教的眼光來看就顯得有點「中式」英語.也許是被外教退文退得多了，挑了很多毛病而不是好的方面來說 還請見諒哈~
❺ 急需英語優秀作文5篇 （要帶有點評和賞析）
I spend many hours playing outdoor sports. I enjoyed team sports like basketball and volleyball. Among lots of sports basketball is my favourite .I fall in love with it the first time I touch it.I really enjoy the feeling when you shoot the ball right in the basket,it brings me much confidence not only in basketball play but also in my real life.And when you play basketball you can learn a lot from it.The ball gets up and down just like how the life is.And everytime it gets down it bounces back,I know from this point that when we are defeated by the difficulties in life we should just get up and move on.Also we realise the importance of team work from basketball.Well it is my favourite sport,and I believe you will like it too
❻ 英語作文賞析一句話的結構
自己寫吧！
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地說……
4.As the proverb says， 正如諺語所說的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必須注意到，…
6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍認為…
7.It's likely that … 這可能是因為…
8.It's hardly that… 這是很難的……
9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它幾乎沒有太多的說…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特別注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that…毫無疑問，無可否認
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 沒有什麼比這更重要的是…
13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…
❼ 英語作文賞析怎麼寫呀
畫出語法、短語
❽ 英語文章賞析
目睹戰爭
過去浮現在我眼前的就像是一場夢。我們再一次攪進為了民回族存亡的巨大的斗爭中。當答他們應征進入這支偉大的自由之伍時我們在他們身邊。我們看見他們和他們愛的人離別。這些人當中會有人是最後一次，和他們愛慕的少女，行走在這片安靜的、蔥郁的土地上。其他的則是正在接受祝福的年齡大一點的人。有些人在和母親惜別，母親們抓著他們的手再三地按在他們的心頭，默然無語。有些人則和妻子話別，試著以平常的語氣說些豪言壯語的話，來驅散她們心中對戰爭可怕的恐懼。我們看著他們離別。我們看著妻子們在陽光下嗚咽。在道路的轉彎處，妻子們揮揮手——高高抓著孩子們的手作為回應。他去了，永遠的去了。
_________________________我翻譯，故我賞析^_^
❾ 評析英語作文
首先的你的用詞不夠好，大量口語話的用詞和拼寫，在書面表達這是應該避免的。例如，首句中的many可以改為a plenty of 或者numerous；第二行中的mom最好寫成mother；另外你用and作為開頭太多了，或許這樣可以調節句式，但是畢竟不是正式用法，你可以把and小寫，直接作為並列從句。
第二，你的文章不是太簡潔，雖然寫夠了70詞，但是並沒有傳達出很多信息。例如，「she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe ···」一句，ask實際就有tell的意思，你可以把它改成，she ask me the reason and to beliece myself.
第三，你的文章邏輯性不強，也就是說連接詞用的太少，句子間的過渡太突兀了。例如，首句你可以寫成when I got "c "in a English test,I was very nervous.and I cried in my bedroom. At that moment my mom came in.你可以用連接詞把文章整個串起來，這樣的話時態就比較清晰，句式也復雜，邏輯性就強了。