英語潤色作文

⑴ 英語小作文求潤色修改~謝謝了

Of course, I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However, If I must choose one to recall, I will choose a meaningful event.
One day, our class visited Home for the Aged. For us,which is the first time to know the life of old people. We all touched by their hope of life and thier active attitude toword the life.

We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them, which made them really happy and content. As a part of this society, I think each of us is the master of society, we all should have the sense of responsibility, then the world will be more beutiful. If our strength can be gathered, it will become a strong force, which will be like a light shining in everyone's hearts.

Touching this socity, we know the feelings of love, kindness and the meaning of life.

⑵ 英語作文潤色

…的同時，聯合使用抗氧化、抗自由基、促進再生、細胞保護因子等產VV

⑶ 幫忙潤色一篇我寫的垃圾英語作文，在線等~

如果大腦裡面沒有垃圾英文，寫出來的就一定不是垃圾英文了！如果把內漢語思維加進了英文裡面，容一般出來的一定是垃圾英文。

因此，寫作英文首先需要用大腦裡面的最好最對的英文來思考，才有可能出來不垃圾的英文！

想了中文又寫出英文，一般都是垃圾！

請改變思維！

⑷ 幫忙潤色改改一篇英語演講稿

我看下來之後覺得你是想表現你對於未來生活的迷茫，而並不是環城旅行。如果環城旅行是你所想表達的東西的話，建議還是重新寫一篇吧。不過還是幫你改改。
I like travelling，because I can meet many people and visit many beautiful places .
One day, I was walking in a street. I found that people were all walking fast as if they had little time left. Just as I was wondering why, my friend called me. She asked me where I was, I told her I was in the city center and how noisy it was, how busy people looked. I asked her whether we would be person like them, lives seemed tired and no endless of boring work. She thought for a while,"maybe..."
After that I went to the library, borrowing some books about France, it has been my dream to go there to learn about design, how I wish I could paint in the ocean of lavender. I like that romantic life.
I returned home at last. The village which I live in is a little remote, but she is hugged by green mountains, I love her.
I looked deeply into the sky, I know wherever I go, I will come back ,here is always my home. Whenever I feel tired ,I will seek consolation here.

⑸ 能讓你修改一篇英文的作文么，請將文章潤色

我是高一的.
前一陣來作文比賽自才獲了省一等獎.
開始我的作文寫的並不好.但是漸漸好象有感覺了.以下是我對你的建議.
1就跟樓上說的一樣，訂一些好的雜志是十分必要的.那些短小精悍的文章很容易吸引人，也不會太乏味.但是前提是必須基於你對她有興趣.沒有興趣就算訂了也毫無作用.
建議訂購:＜＜讀者＞＞其實有幾年高考的作文題可以從上面看到影子.而且這本雜志本身是很值得讀的.＜＜意林＞＞這是我初2時無意間發現的一本雜志，我自己很喜歡.它裡面都是先講一個小故事，然後總結出人生道理，對素材積累很有幫助的.
2可以買基本高考滿分作文.我自己沒買，不過覺得應該會有作文.看看他們是怎樣寫的，為什麼會打滿分.特別是老師

⑹ 誰能幫我潤色一下英語作文

Is it necessary to help someone who is in danger?This question often cause heated discussion.Recently,more people tend to be indifferent to people who are in need.
For example,when an old man fall down to the road , no one dare to show their kindness.how shameful this behavior is!Such news always make me feel sad.It's a pity that it might result in the absence of morality.
As I see,just as the proverb goes,the rose is in her hand,the flavor in mine.It should be put highest priority for us to help others.It is widely recognized that sometimes we would be exorted by those who behave wounded deliberately.What's more,what has resulted in the phenomenon is the loss of awareness of the moral values.
.As we all know,there is no denying of the fact that anybody wouldn't need others' help once in a while.Appealing to the public to help others is both significant and essential.Not only the citizens but also the government are supposed to take measures to minimize the loss of social morality so that there are more warm-hearted people and fewer cold-heart citizens.We might as well to be careful and ensure if they need help before we help others.Meanwhile,the society plays an important role in mutual assistance.
The more attention we pay to others,the more happiness we can generate .

只能這樣了，這樣顯得文章更加完整一些，還是盡量不要網路一些句子，因為一些用法不是很對，用自己熟悉的或者是書上的

⑺ 我有篇英語作文需要修改，最好可以潤色一下

總分630（語文150＋數學150＋英語150＋選科150＋綜合30）
其中選科為政治、歷史、地理（文科），內物理、化學、生容物（理科）中任意一門；綜合分文科綜合和理科綜合，按150分滿分評卷，再折算成30分
語文題型是：現代文閱讀（2篇）＋文言文默寫＋詩歌鑒賞＋文言文閱讀（2篇）＋作文
數學題型是：填空題＋選擇題＋簡答題
英語題型是：聽力（對話、短文、對話填空）＋語法詞彙選擇＋完型填空（2篇）＋閱讀分析（5篇）＋翻譯＋作文
我選的是政治，所以只知道選科里政治的題型是：單項選擇＋多項選擇＋時政填空＋簡答＋分析說明＋論述