英語日記大全高中生
㈠ 英語日記一般多少字,是我的暑假作業,我是高中生
寫80到120就可以了。重要的不是字數,而是你要表達的內容。
㈡ 高中生如何每天高效寫英語日記 英語成績一般120左右
你所說的「高效」抄是指什麼呢?以最快的速度寫完一篇日記嗎?還是在短時間內寫出高品質的日記?
如果只是單純地追求速度而去寫流水賬型的日記,我覺得意義不大,所以建議你從日記的品質著手。
如果你只是去記你每天的生活或者感悟,我想過不了幾天你就沒什麼新鮮感了,因為高中學習生活應該不會每天都有新鮮事可以讓你去寫。那麼與其絞盡腦汁去想每天寫什麼不至於重復又能鍛煉自己的文筆,不如轉變思維,以日記的形式去有針對性地訓練寫作。
每天給自己定一個主題,仿照高考作文的要求去定。或者生活中無意間發生的事引發的聯想,以小見大,比如,上學路上看到有人破壞共享單車,那麼你是怎麼想的,怎麼做的,對於共享單車的維護有什麼好的建議,等等。同時你還要有意識地培養自己對時事的關注,把自己對時事的看法用英語表達出來。
這樣的日記是不是更加「高效」呢?
㈢ 求高中生 英語日記
1
Different people have different lifestyles. They do the same things from morning to evening every day. Usually, they write their plans on paper. But sometimes they remember what things they will do in their minds. I also have my own lifestyle. It is wonderful! I get up early on weekdays, and do the school things then. But at the weekend, I never get up early. I sometimes stay in bed until lunchtime. One day, I stayed in bed very late. It was a weekday. The clock rang. It was six thirty. But I didn』t hear it. I stayed in bed until seven o』clock. I looked at the clock and jumped from the bed to the floor. I was afraid, 「Oh, my God, I will be late.」 I shouted. So I didn』t have breakfast. I put on my shoes and took a taxi to the school. I was in good luck that day. I wasn』t late for school. I was pleased that time. I think I should get up earlier on weekdays or I will be late. I believe you get up earlier on weekdays. Best wishes for you.
2
There are many people who think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was an American billionaire who got everything he wanted. However, in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurses. However, he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do what you want to do. So I would like to say don't hurt yourself and try to make money.Instead, take care of your body and be happy at what you do. Health is more important.
健康更重要
很多人都認為財富比健康更重要。在讀到Howard Hughes的故事之前,我也是這么認為的。Howard Hughes是美國的一個億萬富翁,能得到他想得到的任何東西。但是在他生命最後的二十年中,他的身體變得糟糕,他很悲慘。他有最好的醫生和護士,但仍得不到解脫。我意識到在這個世界上,好的身體抵得上所有的金錢。因為即使你有百萬美元但身體糟糕,也不能做你想做的事情。因此我想說的是關心你的身體,對你所擁有的一切感到高興,不要為掙損害你的身體,健康更重要。
3
I Love Summer【我喜愛夏天】
It is true that summer is hot, very hot. But the wicked summer sun is nothing to me, for I don't usually go out. What I like to do best ring the long summer vacation is to stay in my own little room and read. I love to read, but ring the school year I could hardly find a free moment for reading. Endless assignments press down upon me like a mountain. I feel confined and imprisoned. Once the summer vacation comes, however, I have all the time in the world to read and read and read. I read everything I want to read. I read to my heart's content. My room maybe small, and the sun maybe hot, but I'm free, I'm happy, I'm really living! Oh, how I love summer!
4
My First Time at the English Corner
It was a beautiful Sunday. Our teacher told us that there would be an English Corner near the gate of the People』s Park. I started off soon after breakfast.
It was already 9:20 when I got there. To my joy, the English Corner had just been on for a few minutes. Oh, what a big crowd! There were professors, teachers, cadres①, engineers, workers, students and PLA men. Some were reading the SSP (Shanghai Students』s Post), some were talking while others were listening attentively②. Everyone was eager to learn from others.
I joined them in their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limited that I couldn』t follow them or make myself understood. I was also afraid that someone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease③. I became bolder and came to speak English with them freely.
We talked about the situation at home and abroad, about our school life, our hobbies and our ideas. We exchanged experience in our studies with one another and shared views, all in English. I learned a lot of knowledge and made a lot of friends. Through practice, we all improved our English.
The day was unforgettable. Though today we speak only in simple English, we all believe that tomorrow we will make greater progress in English.
5
Buying Vegetables
This morning I got up early and went to the market to buy some vegetables instead my mother for the first time.
The market was very crowded and busy with nearly all kinds of goods on display. Some sellers were shouting at the top of their voice to attract the attention of the people. Housewives were picking out vegetables and bargaining with the sellers. A man was selling fresh fish, which were swimming in a big basin, and a lot of buyers crowded around it and chose what they wanted. One fruit seller, standing behind piles of fresh fruit, greeted me Warmly, trying to persuade me to buy some. He felt a little disappointed when I shook my head.
What a busy and noisy market! (128 words)
6
Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to people'shealth. However, some people still enjoy smoking. Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others, think that smoking can refresh themselves.
In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.
Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers.
Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.
7
With instries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reces. Efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees. But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants.
Making cities greener has many advantages. First, it can make our air cleaner. Some researchers have proved that trees can rece the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it can make our cities more beautiful. With trees and flowers everywhere, living conditions can be improved. Finally, it can proce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources.
Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts. People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment, but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions.
8
I make it a rule to read the newspaper every day. As a student, I have no time to watch news programs on TV. Besides, watching television takes up a lot of time. Consequently, reading the newspaper becomes the only way for me to learn about what's happening around the world.
There is an old Chinese saying: "A scholar need not leave his home to know what's going on in the world." While newspapers do not carry the latest, up-to-the minute world news, they give us a great deal of useful knowledge. Thus, reading the newspaper is, in my opinion, a must for those who wish to keep up with the times.
我每天照例都要看報紙。身為學生,我沒有時間看電視新聞節目。此外,看電視要花許多時間。因此,看報紙就成了我了解天下大事的唯一途徑。
一句中國古諺說:「秀才不出門,能知天下事。」雖然報紙來不及刊載最新、最近的世界新聞,但是卻能提供我們非常多有用的知識。因此,我的看法為凡是想趕上時代的人都必須閱讀報紙。
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㈣ 高中生寒假英語日記120字~150字
自己修改下日期
25th, Jan, 2009
This morning I went to the English corner which is in the park near my home. It is three years since it was founded. Many middle school students as well as college students and foreigners take part in the activity. People there practice speaking English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is a good chance for me to use what I have learnt in my English class. I felt very cool after I got back home. I』ll try my best to learn English better, for it is so widely used in the world.
7。你喜歡旅遊嗎?請你談一談你的看法。
Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.
8。世界人口已突億大關,人口問題將是今後最大的挑戰。現在地球已變得十分擁擠,幾十年後也許只剩下站立的地方了。我國推行的計劃生育這一基本國策是一個解決人口問題,控制人口增長的好辦法。由於推行了這項國策,國家會發展得更快,人們生活也會有很大的提高…
The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.
China』s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people』s standard of living will become higher and higher.
At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.
9。如今有大批大批的動物被人類捕殺,請你談談你的看法。
Every year many animals die. Some animals die because they are sick. Some die because people kill them and some die because they have nowhere to live. In some countries animals die because there is not enough food. In some countries, people kill animals for money. People also kill lots of other animals for their skins, their fur or their meat .If people don』t stop kill animals, the animals will become fewer and fewer.
10。 作為學生,學校生活一定給你留下了深刻的印象。簡單敘述一下你的學校生活,並談一談自己的感受。
I, a student, my name, is, study, at, the teachers, help…with, make friends, busy, enjoy, think
I am a student. My name is Li Ming. I study at No.20 Middle School. The teachers are very kind and they often help me with my lessons. I have made a lot of friends at school. We live and work like brothers and sisters. We are very busy, but we enjoy most of the classes. When we are free, we play games together or have a picnic in the park. I think my school life is full of fun.
January 13 2005
It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
January 14 2005
It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I』m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don』t feel lonely. But I didn』t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
January 15 2005
It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother』s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother』s company. I sat in my mother』s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother』s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can』t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
January 16 2005
It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mother』s business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometown』s special proct. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.
January 17 2005
Today, I still went to my mother』s office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can』t do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It』 time for me to begin to learn how to work.
A Fishy Story
Two avid fishermen go on a fishing trip. They rent all the equipment: the reels, the rods, the wading suits, the rowboat, the car, and even a cabin in the woods. They spend a fortune.
The first day they go fishing, but they don't catch anything. The same thing happens on the second day, and on the third day. It goes on like this until finally, on the last day of their vacation, one of the men catches a fish.
As they're driving home they're really depressed. One guy turns to the other and says, "Do you realize that this one lousy fish we caught cost us fifteen hundred dollars?"
The other guy says, "Wow! It's a good thing we didn't catch any more!"
2)
Change for award
A lady lost her handbag in the bustle of Christmas shopping. It was found by an honest little boy and returned to her.
Looking in her purse, she commented, "Hmmm.... That's funny. When I lost my bag there was a $20 bill in it. Now there are twenty $1 bills."
The boy quickly replied, "That's right, lady. The last time I found a lady's purse, she didn't have any change for award."
3)
Late for work
Tom had this problem of getting up late in the morning and was always late for work. His boss was mad at him and threatened to fire him if he didn't do something about it. So Tom went to his doctor who gave him a pill and told him to take it before he went to bed.
Tom slept well and in fact beat the alarm in the morning. He had a leisurely breakfast and drove cheerfully to work. "Boss," he said, "The pill actually worked!"
"That's all fine" said the boss. "But where were you yesterday?"
It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
July 7 2006
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don』t feel lonely. But I didn』t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
July 10 2006
I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.
July 14 2006
Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won』t stay to wait for somebody. You can』t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won』t leave them more. Today I found I hadn』t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.
July 24 2006
I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn』t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn』t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.
August 6 2006
It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o』clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn』t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC』s door. I haven』t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn』t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!
August 7 2006
Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn』t see them in the future. I think next year we won』t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare the new term』s new subject.I know, it is the most important for us now.
1 My best friend
I have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. He is my father. My father isn』t tall but he is very kind and lovely. He usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. During that time, he is my teacher. At weekends he plays cheese, cards with me. When I was in trouble. He always helped me in time. I prefer my father to any other friends. I think he is my best friend.
㈤ 很甜的日劇有哪些
1.《交響情人夢》豆瓣9.1分《交響情人夢》是非常尊重原著的走心漫改劇。是圍繞兩位音樂天才展開的戀愛故事,非常搞笑又勵志,沖著高分就不得不看。
劇照
主要講述高中F班的相原琴子(未來穗香飾)一直偷偷暗戀著A班的入江直樹(古川雄輝飾)。一天,琴子終於鼓足勇氣向直樹告白,卻換來冷言拒絕,成了全班同學的笑柄。准備忘記直樹的琴子回到家,房子卻被流星砸毀。沒辦法只能暫時住到父親學生時代的朋友家裡,沒想到居然是直樹的父母,就這樣跟直樹住在了同一屋檐下。之後,琴子想方設法努力想要博得直樹好感卻總是給他帶來一連串倒霉事。盡管如此,倆人之間的關系也漸漸開始發生了微妙的變化。
㈥ 高中生寒假英文日記
Progress of my experiment
Yesterday, I made a report of research-project in a meeting rooming of laboratory department, my senior fellow apprentices involving being leaving and being in, and they asked some questions and gave some good advices related to my experiment, so I felt very grateful to them. For the need of my experiment, I asked for some foreigner scholars help by e-mail, and they are generous to promise helping me. Especially Dr John Colicelli will send these plasmids in the few days, which are important to me. He is greatly appreciated, because I seem to get much faith and force from him. Thank him very much!
start my experiment is difficult to start
Start is the first and most difficult thing. My experiment don't start and I don't know when it starts.I know many things should do for my experiment,and also I hane much puzzles in my mind. I need to look up some literatures related to my research. I must have the faith and courage to do my research.
lose her just sadly
I am sure that I would lose her, which is not I want to see, But it is out of control for me. Reality is cruel ,contradictory and unavoidable. Lost her for me means that I lost the only loved person , and I couldn't be happy forever. I have sweared that if I couldn't get her I wouldn't mention love with other person for these years. Yesterday, I saw her in the library , when I went out from the laboratory, Seeing her is lucky and excited to me.She seemed to be happy with her classmates, and I didn't stared at them until they left my views. I know she is deeply in my heart, or I don't miss her every second. My heart are full of her all and my sadness.
My Happy Times During Winter Vacation
I often go to see my grandma and grandpa ring winter vacation. They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning and breathing the fresh air in the countryside. After snow, I would like to skate and ski with my friends. When night comes, I am used to sitting by the fire and listening to grandma telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back, I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.
January 13 2005
It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
January 14 2005
It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I』 free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don』t feel lonely. But I didn』t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
January 15 2005
It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother』s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother』s company. I sat in my mother』s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother』s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can』t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
㈦ 英語日記大全高中生的圖書目錄
第一部分 方法攻略來自
第一章 什麼是英語日記
第二章 英語日記的類型
第三章 寫好英語日記的要點
第一節 英語日記的格式
第二節 英語日記的人稱
第三節 英語日記的時態
第四章 妙招點撥
妙招一 主題句原則
妙招二 過渡性詞語當橋梁
妙招三 句式多樣化
妙招四 高級詞彙和句型增加文章亮點
第五章 英語日記與英語學習的關系
第二部分 分類日記
1.生活點滴(37篇)
Diary and Me/我和日記
My Happy Girlhood/...
㈧ 求八篇高中生寒假英語日記,拜託了!
你喜歡旅遊嗎?看法
Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a netpanion, so that you can help each other.
作為學生,學校生活一定給你留下了深刻的印象。談一談自己的感受。
I, a student, my name, is, study, at, the teachers, help…with, make friends, busy, enjoy, think
I am a student. My name is Li Ming. I study at No.20 Middle School. The teachers are very kind and they often help me with my lessons. I have made a lot of friends at school. We live and work like brothers and sisters. We are very busy, but we enjoy most of the classes. When we are free, we play games together or have a picnic in the park. I think my school life is full of fun.
㈨ 高中生暑假英語日記
August 3 , 2009
i didn't feel very well today .after lunch , i felt my belly pain . so i went to hosipital with my mother .after had some medicine ,by the way ,it's so bitter ,i had a break . i feel it's serious to be ill .so everyone should take care of itself .healthy is an thing that so important to us . how i wish nobody in the world would get ill any more ! and i make my mind to be a doctor to help the person who are ill , i'll never make the patient feel pain any longer. how i wish my dream could come true! August 6 , 2009
today i was very happy . in the morning , i did some cleaning .i wash cllothes for my parents and clean furniture and floor .i didn't know hoe tired my mom was untill now . i will help my mother do more housework in the near future .then a friend of mine came to visit me ,we were talking for a long time .after lunch ,i had a break. in the afternoon ,i went to saw my grangpa with my brother . we really have a great time . in the evening , i played cards as well as watched tv with my family .it's really an excting day .
August 10 , 2009
it was too hot today .the sunshine was very strong .even if i sit under the fan ,i still feel hot . and i was very fretting because of i felt very empty . my summer hoiday doesn't seems to be meaningful . i stay at home every day and doesn't do anything but play computer . it's so meaningless. the summer holiday is half finished ,however, i haven't do anything meaningful . it was too bad for me .i think i need to do something special to make my holiday be more colurful .
August 12 , 2009
it was a beautiful day . some birds were singing on the trees and the sky looks very blue .the clouds gathered suggest it was a suuny day today .i got up early in the morning at about six . then i did some morning exercises .after breakfast ,i helped my mother plant some flowers .at noon , Xiaojie sended me SMS . she saied that she planed to go to Shangdong Province to have a visit and asked me if i want to go with her .i think it's really a good idea . i plan to go with her after finished my homework . i can't wait !
August 15 ,2009
it was nothing speacial has happened today . i got up late as usual and had lunch at about 11 o'clock . then played computer games with my brother . at first ,i can't played very well so i asked my brother to teach me . after 1 hour , i can play it myself . but i found computer games were so interesting in the afternoon , my mother told me we'll go to my uncle's home at 21th to see my uncle .And at about 7 o'clock ,my father come back home after work . after super , both of my family are go out to have a walk . August 16 ,2009
it was a sunny day and it's not very hot .i didn't get up until 9 o'clock in the morning .because i went to bed late yesterday .after i got up ,i felt very hungry . i ate up all the food that my mother cooked for me .it's so delicious . my uncle bought my grandma a cellphone today , but she didn't know how to use it .so after lunch i went to see my grandma to taught her how to use the cellphone . it was really a hard work , she is too old to remember so many things. finially, i just let her know the simpliest thing ,such as how to dial and hang up the phone .i'll teach her inthe near future .
August 17 ,2009
it was rainy today .in fact , i don't like such days . because i must take an umbrela if i want to go out . i think it's so inconvenient . on the contray , my brother likes rain very much ,he likes play in the water and often go out without umbrella with his friends in rainy days .And they are all become wet from head to foot .i thought it is really a serious thing for me .But i have to say it was much cooler than yesterday because of the rain . my father didn't come back tonight .just because the rain was too heavily . it's dangerous to drive on the road .after supper , i have nothing to do so i went to bad early tonight .
August 18 ,2009
my cousion came back today .i was really very happy .we are always get on well with each other .after lunch ,she suggested me to go shopping with her . we were around a lot of stores and buy so much things . we were really very tired but still very happy . befor supper .we had a talk ,she told me something about her work .she told me how Intense the social competition is .she said it's difficult to servive in the society if we don't work hard . so i decide to stuby hard from now on and i won't make my parents disappiontment .
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My Chiense New Year for this year was fantastic! I went to HaiNan with my parents ring the Chinese New Year and visited my relatives over there. The weather over there was beautiful. It was so much warmer than my city. We stayed in a hotel and we spent a lot of time on the beaches. My parents also took me for a ride round the island. It was so much fun and I wish it was longer.We spent about one week there and then left for GoangShou for 3 days. We went shopping in GuangZhou and everything is so cheap there. My parents bought me a lot stuff that I wanted for a while. I am very happy!