2011年安徽高考英語作文答案

⑴ 09-11年 安徽高考英語滿分作文

2006【安徽卷】【試題回放】

假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家裡，剛回到國內。回國後，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
一本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在卧室的書架上
郵資自己付

注意：
1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫
3、參考詞彙：郵資-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I』ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I』ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I』m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua

[名師點評]
本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那麼文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還採用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

2007【安徽卷】【試題回放】
假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：
l 表示贊成。 l 提出你喜歡的欄目。 l 簡要說明理由。
注意：1. 詞數100左右。 2. 新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
3. 適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目：欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, 「culture express」 gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it』s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, 「blurt out」 is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, 「entertainment」 is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can』t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can』t list more. I really can』t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由於這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

2011高考英語滿分作文賞析

作文題目
假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.詞數：100左右：
2.參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).

I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua

滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以 『which，』引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。

Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there』re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I』U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua

滿分理由
本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用准確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。

Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I』m so glad to know that you』ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I』ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It』s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you』ll like it. If not, I』ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua

滿分理由
本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。

作文：
Dear Bob,
I』m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I』ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I』ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua

滿分理由
本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當准確，如「suitable house」、「not far from』』等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。

⑵ 求2011年安徽省和浙江省高考英語作文答案

我很無能

⑶ 2010年安徽高考英語作文

假如你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次徵文活動，徵文的內容要求你在電視、手機內(cell)和網路容三考中，放棄其中一個並陳述理由。請你以「Which
would
you
give
the
TV,
cell,
or」為題，寫一篇英語短文。

⑷ 2012安徽高考英語作文答案

Good afternoon everyone,
Welcome to our school! school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though,I decide on science as my main subject of study.
The reason are as follows:
Firstly ,science graates are in greater demand than arts in China.Secondly ,the science major may help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Thirdly, my parents wish me to study science at college ,because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.But last not least,my physics teacher is my role moder, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reason that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!

⑸ 有知道2011年安徽高考作文題目的嗎最好帶一些題目的分析……

2011年高考(微博)語文科考試已經結束，以下為2011年安徽卷高考作文題：

以「時間在流逝」為題回，寫一篇答作文。題材不限，不少於800字。 注意：1 立意自定，題目自擬，除詩歌外，問題不限；2 不得套作，不得抄襲；3 不得透露個人信息；4 書寫規范，正確使用標點符號。

⑹ 2011年安徽省英語作文題目

2011年安徽中考還沒考！

⑺ 我寫的2010安徽高考英語作文

看了一遍，覺得你的主要問題是語句不通順 （不是說語法不對，就是這么用著有點別扭）。還有一個就是詞彙還不夠，在我看來用詞比較簡單，缺少可以為你加分的深度。這兩個可能就是你得了18的原因；但我覺得你的整體結構啊什麼的都是沒問題的，我打的話20左右。下面在你的文里舉幾個例子。
「Nowadays, TV, cell, and Web are very common in our daily life. 」 如果改成 "Televisions, cell phones and the internet are all very widely used in our daily life." 就好些，名詞前面不是復數應該加個 "the"

"masses of rubbish short messages" 應該是「junk message" 啦，不是"rubbish" 哦。

」there are a great deal of bad information「 應該是 "there is", "information" 是不可數名詞。還有，盡量避免用比較空泛的形容詞，比如 "bad"/"good", 因為看起來覺得你詞彙不夠，影響打分者對你的印象。

」on some mobile phone websites「 - "some of the mobile phone websites"

"which is harmful to our mental health" - "mental development" 雖然你說的沒錯，但是聽起來別扭。。。

"However, I believe that TV and Web are both useful" - "on the other hand...", 用"however"一般是在說同一件事物的不同方面時用的。

就這些，沒考好也不要擔心，繼續努力學習吧。

⑻ 2011年安徽省會考英語作文(要寫好的）

範文：
'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot. Learning and relaxing are still very important to us. Besides, we often help our parents do housework or farm work. Through that, we realise how hard our parents work every day. And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time. Also, we take an active part in social activities as volunteers. Sometimes, we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children. We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful. We find great pleasure in all these activities.

Best wishes !

Yours Li Ming

⑼ 11年安徽高考英語作文題

某英抄文報開辟了一個專欄襲：Experience。本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以「My Approach to Difficulties in learning」為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些做法。
注意：1、詞數100字左右
2、短文中不能出現本人相關信息