中考英語寫作試卷

『壹』 閱卷老師揭秘：中考英語作文加分和扣分點有哪些

中考英語試卷寫作的分數各個省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之間。下面從閱卷老師的角度分析一下中考英語作文的得分點和扣分點。中考英語作文對考生的要求有四點：1、內容要完整。2、語句流暢。3. 符合字數要求。4、沒有語法錯誤。5、書寫規范。能達到上述要求的作文，都會得到相應的高分。 一：扣分點。
1.內容方面：要點缺失，可酌情扣分。
比如中考作文「I want to do something for my school」，若沒有寫一件具體的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若寫的事情太過於虛幻，沒有實際內容，也會扣1-2分。
2.字數：少於60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英語作文要求60字以上，標點符號不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分？從我們拿到的實例作文來看，16分以上的作文，沒有少於75字的，甚至少於80字的也少之又少。當然，也極少有超過100字的，因為中考試卷的短線格一共80個，在格子下面大約還有2行的空間，可以加20字左右，再多閱卷人就很難看清了，也會影響卷面的美觀。所以，同學們如果想讓作文得到高分，最好是讓字數在75-100字之間。 3. 語法和拼寫錯誤：每個扣0.5，重復錯誤不計。 4. 標點錯誤：每4個扣0.5.
二：加分點。除了這些扣分點，還有一些得分點。
首先根據學生使用復雜句型、單詞和諺語、俗語的情況來加分。只要文章中有1個亮點，基本就可以爭取到1分(3分的文采分是很難全部拿到的)。而這1分的

『貳』 中考英語作文題目 那個題目頻率最高

同學你好~來
哪個題目頻率高，這源個是不好預測的，建議還是從基礎抓起。
這是近幾年高考經常出現的題型
首先2013年的高考英語作文應該側重於要點作文。基本上就是給你一個事情，讓你談談你的看法和感想。
其次要點作文時高考常考題型，也是最為基本的考察學生寫作能力的題型，學生寫好要點作文時寫好其他類型作文的基礎。這類試題通常考察的是根據提示語寫短文，書信，演講，報道，介紹和說明人物或情況等。一檢查考生是否掌握所學問題的基本格式。
最後，在寫這一類作文時，第一要認真審題，防止跑題。第二要根據提示，理順寫作要點。寫作前要將要點標出，按照一定的邏輯順序來寫。第三緊扣要點，組句成文。
你也可以背一些前人的文章，並在考試的時候加以運用到你自己的文章中。
其實作文也就這幾種，把它的基本格式記清楚就OK 了。
以不變應萬變，這樣不管出到什麼內容的作文，你都會寫的很好~
祝你成功~ 加油~

『叄』 歷屆中考英語作文題目和答案 急！！！！！！！！~

1．（浙江麗水）Ellen看到大家都對自己的未來充滿期待，感到特別高興。為了鼓勵大家學好英語，他准備出一期英語學習經驗交流專刊。請根據以下問題和答案的提示並結合你的實際情況，以「My English Learning」為題寫一篇80詞左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三個問題，並且不能出現你的真實姓名、校名和縣名等。

範文：English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
2．（浙江金華）Tom去年來到大明所在的學校學習。在學習期間，他對學校提倡的「創建和諧校園」活動感觸頗深。他發現該校的學生學習主動，興趣廣泛，友愛互助，師生之間關系融洽，人與環境和諧相處（如：保持環境衛生，愛護花草樹木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物等）。(15 分)
①請你以Tom 的名義，給遠在美國的父母寫一封信，介紹學校的現狀並談談你的感受。
②文中不得出現真實的姓名，校名或地名。詞數80左右。信的開頭與結尾已給出，不記入總詞數。
③以下詞彙僅供參考：build up建立，創建 a harmonious campus和諧校園 impress vt. 給……留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I』ve been here for nearly a year. I』m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,

範文：Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I』ve been here for nearly a year. I』m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom

4.09中考英語作文範文：1.How to make friends
It』s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It』s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.

Don』r be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.

Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.

Be a good listner. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.

Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you』ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.

5.（ 2005 廣東河源）中國加入 WTO 後，有一大批外國人來我市——河源參觀。假設你是導游，請根據以下內容，向外賓簡單介紹我市的情況。

要求： 1. 100 詞左右； 2. 要點包括： a. 有悠久的歷史，位於廣東的東北部，離廣州 198 公里，人口約 324 萬。 b. 有許多名勝古跡，如蘇家圍（ Sujiawei ）；萬綠湖（ WanluLake ）等等；萬綠湖是一個很美麗的地方，湖水清澈，無污染；湖中有各種各樣的魚；你可以到那裡劃船，野餐，釣魚，是度假的好去處。你也可以去參觀河源市博物館，在那裡你可以看到許多恐龍化石（ fossil ）。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。
中考滿分作文欣賞：

Ladies and gentlemen，

Welcome to Heyuan， now let me introce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3，240，000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan， such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating， go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides， you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

6.（ 2002 年黃岡市）小明做了一個夢。他夢見自己為北京奧運會做一名志願者：他努力幫助來自世界各國的外國朋友……在交談中，小明讓外國朋友更多地了解北京。外國朋友感謝小明，並認為小明的英語非常好。小明很高興，他甜蜜地笑了……

請你根據設定的夢境並加以想像，寫一段 80 詞左右的短文。開始語和結束語均已給出（不計入總詞數）。

內容要求：

（ 1 ）幫助外國朋友；（ 2 ）與外國朋友交談；（ 3 ）感謝小明；（ 4 ）小明很高興。

詞彙參考： try （ do ） one's best ， find （ that ）， heavy （ lost ）， carry （ show ， take ）， taxi （ car ， bike ）， on the way ， talk with （ about ）

Xiao Ming had a dream （夢） last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve （志願列隊） the Beijing Olympics .

範文：Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried in the street ， he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack ， and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled ， then he woke up .

7.3 .（ 2002 年重慶市）根據內容要求寫一篇 50 － 80 詞的短文。要求：書寫格式正確，語句通暢、流暢，無語法錯誤。

內容提要：今年四月 AAPP 要在重慶召開，外國友人受到重慶人民的熱烈歡迎。外國友人說：「重慶變化很大，街道清潔，燈火明亮，城市秀美，人更美，人們將記住重慶，重慶的明天會越來越好。」

範文：In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing . The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people . The foreign friends said ，「 Chongqing has changed a lot . The streets are clean ， the lights are bright ， the city is beautiful ， and the people are friendly . Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better .

8.（ 2002 年安徽省）安徽黃山被聯合國教科文組織定為世界自然文化遺產。假設外國友人到你校參觀後，准備去旅遊。請根據要點向外國友人簡單介紹黃山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位於安徽南部，是中國著名的旅遊勝地。每年有大批中外遊客前去旅遊觀光。（ 2 ）乘汽車去大約要花 3 個小時；也可以乘火車或飛機去。（ 3 ）登山便可領略其雲海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。

注意 1 詞數： 80 詞左右。 2 請不要逐字翻譯。

範文：The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It's not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain ， you can enjoy the sea of clouds ， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises ， the sky looks very beautiful . It's really a nice place to visit .

9.（2005年北京）根據中文大意，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少於50詞的短文。

假設你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網

範文：Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

10.（2005年湖北）明天（星期五）全班同學將去參觀科學博物館（the Science Museum），由你（班長）通知全體同學。（通知的開頭和結尾已給出）內容如下：

1. 早上8點鍾在校門口集合，步行前往。

2. 下星期一交一份有關參觀的報告。

3. 參觀時要認真聽，仔細看並記下有趣的東西。

4. 不可在博物館內大聲喧嘩及拍照。

5. 帶筆和筆記本。

要求：①不要逐句翻譯。 ②字數60～80。

範文：Fellow students，

We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and notebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museum. Please don't make any noise in the museum and don't take any pictures. You'll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday.

Thank you.

『肆』 中考英語寫作素材！！60到80字．答案滿意可追分

Olympics
The 2008 Olympics is coming. Everyone is excited about it.Well,as students,what can we do for the Olympics.In fact,there are so many things we can do if we are willing to.Here are some examples:
First,study English hard so that when we meet foreigners we can show the best side of us Chineses.We can offer to help the guests from all over the world!
Second,we should take an active part in various activities held by our school, like giving out posters and going to comunities to teach English for Olympics
……

About the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster
As if the nature went out of its way to trouble and challenge Chinese,when Olympics coming,two big disasters have occoured in China this year--the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster.We saw so many people suffered a lot.During these days,we also see a lot things moving and poor.What should we learn from all these?And what can we do ?
First,we must study hard and cherish all we have now,we have seen many poor people are even starving!
Second,we should not waste anymore.We can save pocket money for the sufferers to help them out of trouble.
……

The environment
Nowadays，our life has become better and better.High buildings stand up,and private cars are more and more.While we enjoy all of these,however,shouldn't we pay attention to the nature?
We have seen so much pollution,such as air pollution\water pollution and white pollution.The CO2increasing causes the global warming.Scientists are even worrying whether we can live on the poor earth for another 50 years.
We must take actions from now!
We must plant trees.Trees are our friends,and they can change co2 to o2.They can also prevent big sandstrom.
We must give up using plastic bags.These days the government has banned free plastic bags ,too.We should just follow the rules.Plastic bags are difficult to be decomposed.
……
都是原創哦！我也是今年初三畢業的，總是寫寫寫一下就寫超了，只能用「……」代替，希望幫到你，祝你成功！

『伍』 中考英語寫作的第一題

Dear Mrs Wang:
I'm sorry to say that I can't go to school today. Because I'm ill---I have a bad cold and a high fever. My mother took me to the hospital. The doctor told me that I had a bad cold and he asked me to stay in bed for two days. He also asked me to drink more water and eat fresh fruit. I think so. Eating a balanced diet is important. So I need to ask two days' leave from school.
Thank you!

Yours
Wang Ming
這是老師給印的範文，也許你能用上。

『陸』 初中英語試卷分析範文

一 試卷基本情況：
這套試卷是一套綜合型試卷，考核了學生考前所應達到的英語運用綜合能力，考核的聽力難度系數比較大，詞彙方面考核了學生生容易掌握的詞彙。總的來說，試卷涉及的知識面廣，挖掘的考點比較深。卷面結構為：聽力20分，閱讀理解20分，口頭表達15分，書面表達25分，詞彙和句子20分。
二 學生考試情況分析：

班級 人數 總分 平均分 及格率
( )年級（）班 人 分
( )年級（）班 人 分

三、試卷分析
1、從聽力來看，若想把聽力成為學生的「優勢」得分題型，還需加強教與學。學生「短暫記憶」能力還不過硬，所以在聽力最後語篇理解和理解填空失分較為嚴重。在平時的教學中多引導學生掌握聽力過程中的關鍵詞，培養短暫儲存記憶能力，多聽多練。
2、從閱讀理解來看，基礎好的同學做得還可以，證實了學生每天堅持做閱讀是必不可少的。但中等生和後進生還有一段距離，平時還需在閱讀方面加強訓練。
3、從書面表達和口頭表達看，難度比較大，學生得分率不到30%，這說明學生的基礎知識不知道靈活運用，學得還不夠扎實。詞彙還比較缺乏。在平日教學中，讓學生強化適當的綜合練習後，及時體悟，死學活用。每天累計記憶知識點和單詞要有日計劃，並按照計劃進行下去。
4、從翻譯和作文來看，學生對短語、詞彙、句式的掌握還未到綜合能力。在平日教學中指導學生掌握翻譯「三不曲」方法，是比死記硬背強得多，翻譯和作文不是機械背出來的，而是靠理解和運用的，所以平日要加強訓練。

四、 具體改進措施：
（1）聽力教學應注重學生事實信息方面的聽力訓練，採用「精讀、泛讀」策略，培養學生的語篇意識，要求學生復述聽到的內容或陳述所聽到內容的中心思想，針對不同層次的學生應配有不同的聽力教材。並要求學生落實好每單元的聽力訓練，鼓勵他們平日里要反復聽。
（2）詞彙是最基礎的教學環節。在情境中學習單詞、利用聯想來記憶同類單詞，通過閱讀等多形式的練習鞏固單詞，除統編和牛津教材以及新世紀，甚至四、六級部分詞彙上的詞彙外，還應積累更多的詞彙。平均每天30—35個詞彙的積累。
（3）．閱讀理解訓練中應培養學生的語篇意識、訓練學生的閱讀理解思維。要求學生堅持每天進行限時限量的閱讀訓練，最好堅持每天3—4篇閱讀，結合興趣充分利用英語讀物。另外學生堅持每天反復朗讀課文、補充泛文等英語文章一篇，堅持培養語篇意識。
（4）．作文教學中可首先從「模仿」開始教學，向學生給出好的範文讓學生學會模仿，或者是給出好的短語、句子；讓作文寫得好的學生在班上念出自己的作文，讓其他的學生學習模仿。還可以讓學生自己、相互改寫自己寫的作文。這些都是能很好提高學生英語寫作水平的教學方法。同時，還要求學生讀大量文章，培養語感。同時給出相應的內容讓學生「有話可說，有內容可寫」。
（5）翻譯題型的訓練要求每天5道題的訓練培養學生的句子分析思維，積累必要的表達，指導學生不要機械記憶翻譯題。

『柒』 2011年中考英語熱點作文題

突發事件問題（熱點）
突發事件問題是中考書面表達的熱點話題，從非典到雪災，從地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都頻頻出現在各地中考試卷中，因此必須重視。但這類文章的寫作有一定的難度，掌握基本句式和寫作技巧非常必要
典型例句
1.one +of + 形容詞最高級+ 名詞復數
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It's our ty to do sth
It's our ty to help them.
3.As….as possible
We shoud help them as much as possible.
4.here be…..
Here are lots of things we can do.
5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb+ 形容詞
It makes many people homeless.
7. too …..to
They are too young to look after themselves
例文
1、汶川大地震
（黑龍江雞西）A.5月12日，四川省汶川地區發生了罕見的大地震，那裡的人們痛失親人和家園。全國人民眾志成城，抗震救災。作為一名中學生，請你談談你的做法和感受。
要求：文章語言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞准確，80—100字左右；詞彙參考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感動be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自願做某事volunteer to do sth
參考範文：
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I』m deeply moved by these people. So I』ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪災
去年春節期間，我國大部分地區遭受雪災，特別是南方，室幾十年未遇。公路、鐵路、機場都被迫關閉，電網癱瘓，數百萬人不能回家過年。部分山區人民生活異常困難，在各級政府的帶領下，人民群眾、解放軍戰士英勇抗擊雪災，涌現出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改變這種狀態？
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn't go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
從電視上看到美國正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分學校停課你為你正在美國上學的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔心。請立即給他寫一封email詢問他的情況，並給他提出防護建議。
要點：
一．詢問
1.他的健康狀況；
2.他們學校有無甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他們是否還上學。
二．建議
1.盡量呆在家裡，少去人多的地方；
2.勤洗手；講衛生
3.多開窗，保持空氣新鮮；
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I』m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you』d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you』ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、(四川南充）「5.12」汶川大地震後，某校將開展「人人為災區孩子獻愛心」的主題班會活動，現在請你以學生會的名義寫一份倡議書，內容要點如下：
1.許多孩子地震後不能上學 2.。沒有足夠的學慣用品和衣物 3.每個孩子都應該有上學的權利
4.我們應該作一些力所能及的事情去幫助、他們，比如…… 5.希望他們能盡快重返校園…….
注意：1.可根據要點，適當發揮，（參考詞彙：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can）
2.詞數：70詞左右
參考作文：
Dear students，
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don』t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students』 Union