2011年安徽高考英语作文答案

⑴ 09-11年 安徽高考英语满分作文

2006【安徽卷】【试题回放】

假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助
一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵
词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上
邮资自己付

注意：
1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
3、参考词汇：邮资-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I’m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua

[名师点评]
本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

2007【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 参考栏目：栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

2011高考英语满分作文赏析

作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua

满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以 ‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua

满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua

满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作文：
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua

满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

⑵ 求2011年安徽省和浙江省高考英语作文答案

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⑶ 2010年安徽高考英语作文

假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机内(cell)和网络容三考中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which
would
you
give
the
TV,
cell,
or”为题，写一篇英语短文。

⑷ 2012安徽高考英语作文答案

Good afternoon everyone,
Welcome to our school! school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though,I decide on science as my main subject of study.
The reason are as follows:
Firstly ,science graates are in greater demand than arts in China.Secondly ,the science major may help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Thirdly, my parents wish me to study science at college ,because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.But last not least,my physics teacher is my role moder, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reason that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!

⑸ 有知道2011年安徽高考作文题目的吗最好带一些题目的分析……

2011年高考(微博)语文科考试已经结束，以下为2011年安徽卷高考作文题：

以“时间在流逝”为题回，写一篇答作文。题材不限，不少于800字。 注意：1 立意自定，题目自拟，除诗歌外，问题不限；2 不得套作，不得抄袭；3 不得透露个人信息；4 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。

⑹ 2011年安徽省英语作文题目

2011年安徽中考还没考！

⑺ 我写的2010安徽高考英语作文

看了一遍，觉得你的主要问题是语句不通顺 （不是说语法不对，就是这么用着有点别扭）。还有一个就是词汇还不够，在我看来用词比较简单，缺少可以为你加分的深度。这两个可能就是你得了18的原因；但我觉得你的整体结构啊什么的都是没问题的，我打的话20左右。下面在你的文里举几个例子。
“Nowadays, TV, cell, and Web are very common in our daily life. ” 如果改成 "Televisions, cell phones and the internet are all very widely used in our daily life." 就好些，名词前面不是复数应该加个 "the"

"masses of rubbish short messages" 应该是“junk message" 啦，不是"rubbish" 哦。

”there are a great deal of bad information“ 应该是 "there is", "information" 是不可数名词。还有，尽量避免用比较空泛的形容词，比如 "bad"/"good", 因为看起来觉得你词汇不够，影响打分者对你的印象。

”on some mobile phone websites“ - "some of the mobile phone websites"

"which is harmful to our mental health" - "mental development" 虽然你说的没错，但是听起来别扭。。。

"However, I believe that TV and Web are both useful" - "on the other hand...", 用"however"一般是在说同一件事物的不同方面时用的。

就这些，没考好也不要担心，继续努力学习吧。

⑻ 2011年安徽省会考英语作文(要写好的）

范文：
'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot. Learning and relaxing are still very important to us. Besides, we often help our parents do housework or farm work. Through that, we realise how hard our parents work every day. And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time. Also, we take an active part in social activities as volunteers. Sometimes, we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children. We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful. We find great pleasure in all these activities.

Best wishes !

Yours Li Ming

⑼ 11年安徽高考英语作文题

某英抄文报开辟了一个专栏袭：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。
注意：1、词数100字左右
2、短文中不能出现本人相关信息