中考英语写作试卷

『壹』 阅卷老师揭秘：中考英语作文加分和扣分点有哪些

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3. 符合字数要求。4、没有语法错误。5、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。 一：扣分点。
1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。
比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。 3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计。 4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.
二：加分点。除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点。
首先根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的

『贰』 中考英语作文题目 那个题目频率最高

同学你好~来
哪个题目频率高，这源个是不好预测的，建议还是从基础抓起。
这是近几年高考经常出现的题型
首先2013年的高考英语作文应该侧重于要点作文。基本上就是给你一个事情，让你谈谈你的看法和感想。
其次要点作文时高考常考题型，也是最为基本的考察学生写作能力的题型，学生写好要点作文时写好其他类型作文的基础。这类试题通常考察的是根据提示语写短文，书信，演讲，报道，介绍和说明人物或情况等。一检查考生是否掌握所学问题的基本格式。
最后，在写这一类作文时，第一要认真审题，防止跑题。第二要根据提示，理顺写作要点。写作前要将要点标出，按照一定的逻辑顺序来写。第三紧扣要点，组句成文。
你也可以背一些前人的文章，并在考试的时候加以运用到你自己的文章中。
其实作文也就这几种，把它的基本格式记清楚就OK 了。
以不变应万变，这样不管出到什么内容的作文，你都会写的很好~
祝你成功~ 加油~

『叁』 历届中考英语作文题目和答案 急！！！！！！！！~

1．（浙江丽水）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。

范文：English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
2．（浙江金华）Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)
①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。
②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,

范文：Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom

4.09中考英语作文范文：1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.

Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.

Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.

Be a good listner. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.

Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.

5.（ 2005 广东河源）中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求： 1. 100 词左右； 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于广东的东北部，离广州 198 公里，人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹，如苏家围（ Sujiawei ）；万绿湖（ WanluLake ）等等；万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样的鱼；你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆，在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石（ fossil ）。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。
中考满分作文欣赏：

Ladies and gentlemen，

Welcome to Heyuan， now let me introce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3，240，000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan， such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating， go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides， you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

6.（ 2002 年黄冈市）小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者：他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中，小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明，并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴，他甜蜜地笑了……

请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象，写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出（不计入总词数）。

内容要求：

（ 1 ）帮助外国朋友；（ 2 ）与外国朋友交谈；（ 3 ）感谢小明；（ 4 ）小明很高兴。

词汇参考： try （ do ） one's best ， find （ that ）， heavy （ lost ）， carry （ show ， take ）， taxi （ car ， bike ）， on the way ， talk with （ about ）

Xiao Ming had a dream （梦） last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve （志愿列队） the Beijing Olympics .

范文：Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried in the street ， he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack ， and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled ， then he woke up .

7.3 .（ 2002 年重庆市）根据内容要求写一篇 50 － 80 词的短文。要求：书写格式正确，语句通畅、流畅，无语法错误。

内容提要：今年四月 AAPP 要在重庆召开，外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。外国友人说：“重庆变化很大，街道清洁，灯火明亮，城市秀美，人更美，人们将记住重庆，重庆的明天会越来越好。”

范文：In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing . The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people . The foreign friends said ，“ Chongqing has changed a lot . The streets are clean ， the lights are bright ， the city is beautiful ， and the people are friendly . Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better .

8.（ 2002 年安徽省）安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。（ 2 ）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。（ 3 ）登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 1 词数： 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。

范文：The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It's not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain ， you can enjoy the sea of clouds ， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises ， the sky looks very beautiful . It's really a nice place to visit .

9.（2005年北京）根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。

假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
英语作文网

范文：Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

10.（2005年湖北）明天（星期五）全班同学将去参观科学博物馆（the Science Museum），由你（班长）通知全体同学。（通知的开头和结尾已给出）内容如下：

1. 早上8点钟在校门口集合，步行前往。

2. 下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。

3. 参观时要认真听，仔细看并记下有趣的东西。

4. 不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照。

5. 带笔和笔记本。

要求：①不要逐句翻译。 ②字数60～80。

范文：Fellow students，

We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and notebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museum. Please don't make any noise in the museum and don't take any pictures. You'll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday.

Thank you.

『肆』 中考英语写作素材！！60到80字．答案满意可追分

Olympics
The 2008 Olympics is coming. Everyone is excited about it.Well,as students,what can we do for the Olympics.In fact,there are so many things we can do if we are willing to.Here are some examples:
First,study English hard so that when we meet foreigners we can show the best side of us Chineses.We can offer to help the guests from all over the world!
Second,we should take an active part in various activities held by our school, like giving out posters and going to comunities to teach English for Olympics
……

About the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster
As if the nature went out of its way to trouble and challenge Chinese,when Olympics coming,two big disasters have occoured in China this year--the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster.We saw so many people suffered a lot.During these days,we also see a lot things moving and poor.What should we learn from all these?And what can we do ?
First,we must study hard and cherish all we have now,we have seen many poor people are even starving!
Second,we should not waste anymore.We can save pocket money for the sufferers to help them out of trouble.
……

The environment
Nowadays，our life has become better and better.High buildings stand up,and private cars are more and more.While we enjoy all of these,however,shouldn't we pay attention to the nature?
We have seen so much pollution,such as air pollution\water pollution and white pollution.The CO2increasing causes the global warming.Scientists are even worrying whether we can live on the poor earth for another 50 years.
We must take actions from now!
We must plant trees.Trees are our friends,and they can change co2 to o2.They can also prevent big sandstrom.
We must give up using plastic bags.These days the government has banned free plastic bags ,too.We should just follow the rules.Plastic bags are difficult to be decomposed.
……
都是原创哦！我也是今年初三毕业的，总是写写写一下就写超了，只能用“……”代替，希望帮到你，祝你成功！

『伍』 中考英语写作的第一题

Dear Mrs Wang:
I'm sorry to say that I can't go to school today. Because I'm ill---I have a bad cold and a high fever. My mother took me to the hospital. The doctor told me that I had a bad cold and he asked me to stay in bed for two days. He also asked me to drink more water and eat fresh fruit. I think so. Eating a balanced diet is important. So I need to ask two days' leave from school.
Thank you!

Yours
Wang Ming
这是老师给印的范文，也许你能用上。

『陆』 初中英语试卷分析范文

一 试卷基本情况：
这套试卷是一套综合型试卷，考核了学生考前所应达到的英语运用综合能力，考核的听力难度系数比较大，词汇方面考核了学生生容易掌握的词汇。总的来说，试卷涉及的知识面广，挖掘的考点比较深。卷面结构为：听力20分，阅读理解20分，口头表达15分，书面表达25分，词汇和句子20分。
二 学生考试情况分析：

班级 人数 总分 平均分 及格率
( )年级（）班 人 分
( )年级（）班 人 分

三、试卷分析
1、从听力来看，若想把听力成为学生的“优势”得分题型，还需加强教与学。学生“短暂记忆”能力还不过硬，所以在听力最后语篇理解和理解填空失分较为严重。在平时的教学中多引导学生掌握听力过程中的关键词，培养短暂储存记忆能力，多听多练。
2、从阅读理解来看，基础好的同学做得还可以，证实了学生每天坚持做阅读是必不可少的。但中等生和后进生还有一段距离，平时还需在阅读方面加强训练。
3、从书面表达和口头表达看，难度比较大，学生得分率不到30%，这说明学生的基础知识不知道灵活运用，学得还不够扎实。词汇还比较缺乏。在平日教学中，让学生强化适当的综合练习后，及时体悟，死学活用。每天累计记忆知识点和单词要有日计划，并按照计划进行下去。
4、从翻译和作文来看，学生对短语、词汇、句式的掌握还未到综合能力。在平日教学中指导学生掌握翻译“三不曲”方法，是比死记硬背强得多，翻译和作文不是机械背出来的，而是靠理解和运用的，所以平日要加强训练。

四、 具体改进措施：
（1）听力教学应注重学生事实信息方面的听力训练，采用“精读、泛读”策略，培养学生的语篇意识，要求学生复述听到的内容或陈述所听到内容的中心思想，针对不同层次的学生应配有不同的听力教材。并要求学生落实好每单元的听力训练，鼓励他们平日里要反复听。
（2）词汇是最基础的教学环节。在情境中学习单词、利用联想来记忆同类单词，通过阅读等多形式的练习巩固单词，除统编和牛津教材以及新世纪，甚至四、六级部分词汇上的词汇外，还应积累更多的词汇。平均每天30—35个词汇的积累。
（3）．阅读理解训练中应培养学生的语篇意识、训练学生的阅读理解思维。要求学生坚持每天进行限时限量的阅读训练，最好坚持每天3—4篇阅读，结合兴趣充分利用英语读物。另外学生坚持每天反复朗读课文、补充泛文等英语文章一篇，坚持培养语篇意识。
（4）．作文教学中可首先从“模仿”开始教学，向学生给出好的范文让学生学会模仿，或者是给出好的短语、句子；让作文写得好的学生在班上念出自己的作文，让其他的学生学习模仿。还可以让学生自己、相互改写自己写的作文。这些都是能很好提高学生英语写作水平的教学方法。同时，还要求学生读大量文章，培养语感。同时给出相应的内容让学生“有话可说，有内容可写”。
（5）翻译题型的训练要求每天5道题的训练培养学生的句子分析思维，积累必要的表达，指导学生不要机械记忆翻译题。

『柒』 2011年中考英语热点作文题

突发事件问题（热点）
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要
典型例句
1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It's our ty to do sth
It's our ty to help them.
3.As….as possible
We shoud help them as much as possible.
4.here be…..
Here are lots of things we can do.
5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless.
7. too …..to
They are too young to look after themselves
例文
1、汶川大地震
（黑龙江鸡西）A.5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右；词汇参考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感动be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
参考范文：
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪灾
去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn't go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：
一．询问
1.他的健康状况；
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他们是否还上学。
二．建议
1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；
2.勤洗手；讲卫生
3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜；
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、(四川南充）“5.12”汶川大地震后，某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：
1.许多孩子地震后不能上学 2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物 3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利
4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如…… 5.希望他们能尽快重返校园…….
注意：1.可根据要点，适当发挥，（参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can）
2.词数：70词左右
参考作文：
Dear students，
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don’t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students’ Union